Re: [netconf] WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities

[Kent Watsen <[e-mail]>]

Hi Balazs,

> Hello,
> I added  your comments to the upcoming next version of the draft.
> Regards Balazs

Your update missed a couple nits (see below).

Kent // contributor




> BALAZS2: OK,  Updated with first part, but Rob has asked for an extra sentence about the dangers of revealing read-only data, I added that too.
> “All protocol-accessible data are read-only and cannot be modified. 
>         The data in this module is not security sensitive.
>         Access control may be configured, to avoid exposing 
>         the read-only data.”
>  
> Okay.  s/protocol-accessible data/protocol-accessible data nodes/




> BALAZS2: Agreed. This is part of normal file handling, transport. So I reworded this to:
> “When that data is in file format, data should be protected against 
>         modification or unauthorized access using normal file handling and 
>         secure and mutually authenticated file transport mechanisms.”
>  
> Okay.  The end can be shortened, i.e., just "file handling mechanisms".




Kent