Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt

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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
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This I-D would appear to have a number of defects in the YANG module.

- no Copyright

- no request to the RFC Editor to update the revision date to the
publication date

- no Reference statements for
     import ietf-yang-types { prefix yang;}
     import ietf-subscribed-notifications {prefix sn;  }
     import ietf-datastores {prefix ds; }
     import ietf-restconf   { prefix rc;

- Restconf is an Informative Reference in the I-D

- no reference in the I-D for yang-types

- I-D references RFC7223 which is obsoleted by RFC8343

Tom Petch


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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network Configuration WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : YANG Datastore Subscription
>         Authors         : Alexander Clemm
>                           Eric Voit
>                           Alberto Gonzalez Prieto
>                           Ambika Prasad Tripathy
>                           Einar Nilsen-Nygaard
>                           Andy Bierman
>                           Balazs Lengyel
> Filename        : draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
> Pages           : 54
> Date            : 2018-05-30
>
> Abstract:
>    Via the mechanism described in this document, subscriber
applications
>    may request a continuous, customized stream of updates from a YANG
>    datastore.  Providing such visibility into changes made upon YANG
>    configuration and operational datastore nodes enables new
>    capabilities based on the remote mirroring of configuration and
>    operational state.
>
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