Re: [Netconf] [netconf] Editorial change for draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf

Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com> Fri, 01 June 2018 16:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Netconf] [netconf] Editorial change for draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf
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Hi Rohit,

I think that this is a useful clarification, but thinking about this 
further, I think that this can probably be stated more generally.  
Hence, I'll merge the proposed update as part of my response to your " 
Editorial change-2 for draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf" thread.

Thanks,
Rob


On 31/05/2018 09:54, Rohit R Ranade wrote:
>
> Change 1:
>
> ================
>
> Section 3.1.1
>
> OLD:
>
> The "config-filter" parameter can be used to retrieve only "config
>
>    true" or "config false" nodes.
>
> NEW:
>
> The "config-filter" parameter can be used to retrieve only "config
>
>    true" or "config false" nodes. Note that if “config-filter” is set 
> to “false”,
>
> configuration ancestors (if any) and list key leafs (if any)
>
> are also returned.
>
> Note:
>
> “retrieve only “config false” nodes maybe misleading. So the use-full 
> text written in RFC 8040 in Example 3 can be re-used here.
>
> With Regards,
>
> Rohit R Ranade
>
>
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