Re: [netconf] I-D Action: draft-dai-quic-netconf-01.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Tue, 29 October 2019 12:07 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] I-D Action: draft-dai-quic-netconf-01.txt
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Dai

There is something wrong with the formatting of this I-D which, for me,
makes it too hard to read.  The  text is littered     with additional
spaces, like tab characters gone wild or a malign word processor.  I
would like that    fixed before I try    and read it (extra spaces
inserted for     effect:-).

Tom Petch

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
>
>
>         Title           : Using NETCONF over QUIC connection
>         Authors         : Jinyou Dai
>                           Xueshun Wang
>                           Yang Kou
>                           Lifen Zhou
> Filename        : draft-dai-quic-netconf-01.txt
> Pages           : 13
> Date            : 2019-10-28
>
> Abstract:
>    The Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF) provides mechanisms to
>    install, manipulate, and delete the configuration of network
devices.
>    At present, almost all implementations of NETCONF are based on TCP
>    protocol. QUIC, a new UDP-based transport protocol, can facilitate
to
>    improve the transportation performance when being used as an
>    infrastructure layer of NETCONF.   This document describes how to
use
>    the QUIC protocol as the transport   protocol of
>    NETCONF(NETCONFoQUIC).
>
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dai-quic-netconf/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dai-quic-netconf-01
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dai-quic-netconf-01
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-dai-quic-netconf-01
>
>
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