Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt

Alexander Clemm <alexander.clemm@huawei.com> Mon, 02 July 2018 00:12 UTC

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From: Alexander Clemm <alexander.clemm@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
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Hello Tom, 
thank you for your comments!  We have just posted an updated revision (-17) that addresses them all.
Kind regards
--- Alex

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Netconf [mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of t.petch
> Sent: Thursday, May 31, 2018 3:02 AM
> To: netconf@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
> 
> This I-D would appear to have a number of defects in the YANG module.
> 
> - no Copyright
> 
> - no request to the RFC Editor to update the revision date to the publication date
> 
> - no Reference statements for
>      import ietf-yang-types { prefix yang;}
>      import ietf-subscribed-notifications {prefix sn;  }
>      import ietf-datastores {prefix ds; }
>      import ietf-restconf   { prefix rc;
> 
> - Restconf is an Informative Reference in the I-D
> 
> - no reference in the I-D for yang-types
> 
> - I-D references RFC7223 which is obsoleted by RFC8343
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
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> 
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Network Configuration WG of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : YANG Datastore Subscription
> >         Authors         : Alexander Clemm
> >                           Eric Voit
> >                           Alberto Gonzalez Prieto
> >                           Ambika Prasad Tripathy
> >                           Einar Nilsen-Nygaard
> >                           Andy Bierman
> >                           Balazs Lengyel
> > Filename        : draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
> > Pages           : 54
> > Date            : 2018-05-30
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    Via the mechanism described in this document, subscriber
> applications
> >    may request a continuous, customized stream of updates from a YANG
> >    datastore.  Providing such visibility into changes made upon YANG
> >    configuration and operational datastore nodes enables new
> >    capabilities based on the remote mirroring of configuration and
> >    operational state.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16
> >
> >
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