Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Fri, 04 January 2019 11:43 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>, "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-26.txt
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Kent Watsen" <kwatsen@juniper.net>

Sent: Wednesday, January 02, 2019 11:26 PM
> Hi Tom,
>
> > You have added the reference to RFC8174 to the YANG modules but ...
> > it appears as [RFC8174] which to my eyes looks like a HTML/XML
anchor
> > which will not work in a plain text YANG module.
>
> Right you are, I had simply copy/pasted the text from the plain-text
> version of a draft.
>
> Below is the my proposed diff to the YANG modules - any concerns?
>
>      The key words 'MUST', 'MUST NOT', 'REQUIRED', 'SHALL',
>      'SHALL NOT', 'SHOULD', 'SHOULD NOT', 'RECOMMENDED',
>      'NOT RECOMMENDED', 'MAY', and 'OPTIONAL' in this document
> -    are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119]
> -    [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
> +    are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 (RFC 2119,
> +    RFC 8174) when, and only when, they appear in all
>      capitals, as shown here.

Depends what the XML looks like :-) but that looks ok.

Tom Petch

> PS: Welcome to 2019 all!
>
> Kent
>
>
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