[netconf] Re: draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | <reference-point> precision

["James Cumming (Nokia)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Kent, Hi Dylan,

Rob and I have reviewed this in conjunction with the impending update to -05 and have included Kent’s suggested wording.

Thanks all,

James




From: Kent Watsen <[e-mail]>
Date: Saturday, 10 August 2024 at 12:11
To: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Cc: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: [netconf] draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | <reference-point> precision

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On Aug 9, 2024, at 6:27 AM, [e-mail] wrote:

Hi

Quoting  4.7.2.4.1:
"The creation-point selection of <reference-point> will provide an output comparing the current private-candidate configuration datastore with the same private-candidate datastore at the time this private-candidate was initially created."

When the private-candidate is initially created, it is exactly identical to the running configuration, quoting 2.3:
"The private candidate configuration contains a full copy of the running configuration when it is created". I think it would be great to add this precision here as well.

I would suggest this formulation:
"The creation-point selection of <reference-point> will provide an output comparing the current private-candidate configuration datastore with the same private-candidate datastore at the time this private-candidate was initially created (as a full copy of the running configuration)."

Do you think this needs precision as well?

I don’t think so.  Section 2.3 comes before 4.7.2.4.1.

That said, I think the very end of the quoted text could be improved as follows:

"The creation-point selection of <reference-point> will provide an output comparing the current private-candidate configuration datastore with the same private-candidate datastore at the time it was created."

K.




Best regards,
Dylan Sadoun


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