Re: [netconf] WGLC: draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-11

I support the publication of this draft, but would like some of the issues addressed in the document. They are mostly nits that I am hoping can be addressed before sending it to IESG. I reviewed the -12 version of the document.

s 2 Introduction

s/as it part of/as it is part of/
s/Examples include:/Examples include/
s/even to individual/even individual/
s/both in implementation-time/both at implementation-time/

s 2.1 YANG-push Notification Capabilities

OLD:
      to check that capability information provided early, already in
      implementation-time is indeed what the publisher implements (is
      the supplied documentation correct?)

NEW:
      to check that capability information provided earlier, at
      implementation-time is what the publisher has implemented

s 3 Providing System Capability Information

s/already in implementation-time/already at implementation-time/

s 4.2 YANG Module & s 5.2 YANG Module

This section needs to list every draft/RFC referenced in the YANG model.

All imports should carry a reference statement to the draft/RFC they are importing from, e.g. ietf-netconf-acm.

s 7.2 The YANG Module Names Registry

The indentation of the second registry is off.

Finally, have all the examples in the appendix been validated?

Thanks.

> On Mar 4, 2020, at 1:54 PM, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote:
> 
> Dear All,
> 
> This WGLC has received zero responses, which is insufficient to progress the document at this time.  The chairs have therefore decided to extend the WGLC for another two weeks, now ending March 18th.  
> 
> Again, positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcomed.  This is useful and important, even from authors.  Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at this time.
> 
> The NETCONF Chairs
> 
> 
> 
> 
>> On Feb 17, 2020, at 8:27 PM, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote:
>> 
>> FWIW, this is WGLC #2, after the major updates resulting from WGLC #1 (in October).
>> 
>> K.
>> 
>> 
>>> On Feb 17, 2020, at 7:47 PM, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote:
>>> 
>>> This message begins a two-week WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-11 ending on March 2nd (a week before the IETF 107 submission cutoff deadline).  Here is a direct link to the HTML version of the draft:
>>> 
>>> 	https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-11
>>> 
>>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!  This is useful and important, even from authors.  Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at this time.
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