Re: [netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

Thank you for the review, please see inline.


´╗┐On 2019-05-14, 4:44 PM, "Alissa Cooper via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:

    Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13: No Objection
    
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    = Section 9 =
    
            "Access control must be set so that only someone
          with proper access permissions, and perhaps even HTTP session has
          the ability to access this resource."
    
    There is a grammar error in this sentence -- "perhaps even HTTP session"
    doesn't follow from the antecedent.
Yes this text is not clear, good catch. I will change it to the following
        o  "uri": leaf will show where subscribed resources might be located
           on a publisher.  Access control must be set so that only someone
           with proper access permissions, i.e., the same RESTCONF [RFC8040]
           user credentials which invoked the corresponding
           "establish-subscription", has the ability to access this resource.

Regards,
Reshad.