Re: [Netconf] [netconf] Editorial change for draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf

Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Thu, 31 May 2018 18:54 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
To: Rohit R Ranade <rohitrranade@huawei.com>, "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Netconf] [netconf] Editorial change for draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] [netconf] Editorial change for draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf
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As a contributor, I agree with this clarification.   As co-chair, I view this as an editorial update that the authors (assuming agreement) can commit/push while waiting for IETF LC to commence.

Kent



On 5/31/18, 4:54 AM, "Netconf on behalf of Rohit R Ranade" <netconf-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of rohitrranade@huawei.com<mailto:rohitrranade@huawei.com>> wrote:

Change 1:
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Section 3.1.1

OLD:
The "config-filter" parameter can be used to retrieve only "config
   true" or "config false" nodes.


NEW:
The "config-filter" parameter can be used to retrieve only "config
   true" or "config false" nodes. Note that if “config-filter” is set to “false”,
configuration ancestors (if any) and list key leafs (if any)
are also returned.

Note:
“retrieve only “config false” nodes maybe misleading. So the use-full text written in RFC 8040 in Example 3 can be re-used here.


With Regards,
Rohit R Ranade