Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-20.txt

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Wed, 24 October 2018 06:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-20.txt
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Hi,

I had a quick look at the diff and found two issues:

In Figure 6, the prefix "ypatch:" is still present on a couple of
leafs:

          |     +--ro patch-id        string
          |     +--ro ypatch:comment?    string

...


And in the module you have accidentally added the number "6":

               values marshalled and placed into a new update
              6 record.";
             ^^^


/martin


internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network Configuration WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Subscription to YANG Datastores
>         Authors         : Alexander Clemm
>                           Eric Voit
>                           Alberto Gonzalez Prieto
>                           Ambika Prasad Tripathy
>                           Einar Nilsen-Nygaard
>                           Andy Bierman
>                           Balazs Lengyel
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-20.txt
> 	Pages           : 57
> 	Date            : 2018-10-22
> 
> Abstract:
>    Via the mechanism described in this document, subscriber applications
>    may request a continuous, customized stream of updates from a YANG
>    datastore.  Providing such visibility into updates enables new
>    capabilities based on the remote mirroring and monitoring of
>    configuration and operational state.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-20
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-20
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-20
> 
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