Re: [netconf] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-keystore-20

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Tue, 20 April 2021 12:44 UTC

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Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2021 14:44:15 +0200
From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
To: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-keystore-20
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On Tue, Apr 20, 2021 at 01:28:44AM +0000, Kent Watsen wrote:
> 
> It took me while to determine what text got clipped above which you this is better.  Let me clarify, you think that it would be better to both:
> 
> OLD; keystore-supported
> NEW: central-keystore-supported
> 
> *and*
> 
> OLD:  … the keystore, when this module is implemented
> NEW: … the central keystore, when this module is implemented
> 
> Correct?

Yes.

/js

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