Re: [netconf] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-12.txt

> On Mar 9, 2020, at 7:55 AM, Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Hello,
> I updated the draft 
> - Enhanced the description of max-nodes-per-update
> - Formatted the modules to with pyang to be no longer than 69 characters. 
> - Added mandatory references about imports

I think you got part of what is being asked for. You added references to the drafts/RFCs that you are referencing from the YANG model in the text of Section 5.2. However, you are still missing the reference statement in the model

  import ietf-netconf-acm {
    prefix nacm;
    reference
      "RFC 8341: Network Configuration Access”;   <— You are missing this.
  }
  import ietf-yang-library {
    prefix yanglib;
    description
      "Revision 2019-01-04 or a
       revision derived from it is REQUIRED.”;
                                                  <— And here
  }

Cheers.

> Regards Balazs
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org> 
> Sent: 2020. március 9., hétfő 15:49
> To: Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>; Alexander Clemm <ludwig@clemm.org>; Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-12.txt
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-12.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Balazs Lengyel and posted to the IETF repository.
> 
> Name:		draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities
> Revision:	12
> Title:		Generic YANG-related System Capabilities and YANG-Push Notification Capabilities
> Document date:	2020-03-09
> Group:		netconf
> Pages:		25
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-12.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-12
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-12
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document proposes two YANG modules.  The module ietf-system-
>   capabilities provides a structure that can be used to specify any
>   YANG related system capability.
> 
>   The module ietf-notification-capabilities allows a publisher to
>   specify capabilities related to "Subscription to YANG Datastores"
>   (YANG-Push).  It proposes to use YANG Instance Data to document this
>   information and make it already available at implementation-time, but
>   also allow it to be reported at run-time.
> 
> 
> 
> 
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