[Netconf] Review of draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-15

[Qin Wu <[e-mail]>]

Hi, All:
I am assigned as acting shepherd to assist Kent to review draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-15
and have the following comments:
1. I see event record can be sent via notification for dynamic subscription based on section 2.6 of draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications-19, but I
didn't see subscription state notifications can be sent for dynamic subscription based on section 2.7 of draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-
notifications-19. If this is true, Configured subscription example should be cleaned up in the appendix.
2. By reading section 10, it is not clear which document should be updated to
support notification after a successful "establish-subscription", RFC6241 itself, or this document?
3. Running nits tools, there are the following errors and warnings:
"
  Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :
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  ** The document seems to lack an IANA Considerations section.  (See Section
     2.2 of https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist for how to handle the case
     when there are no actions for IANA.)


  Miscellaneous warnings:
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  == The copyright year in the IETF Trust and authors Copyright Line does not
     match the current year

  == Line 195 has weird spacing: '...ription  estab...'

  == Line 199 has weird spacing: '...ription    res...'

  == Line 211 has weird spacing: '... stream   esta...'

  == Line 214 has weird spacing: '...ription    ret...'

  == Line 216 has weird spacing: '... stream   modi...'
"
4. RFC6241 needs to be updated but it is not listed on the title page header.

Note that I have talked with authors on most of these comments, I believe a new version will come soon to address these comments.

-Qin