Re: [netconf] Updates posted yesterday

["Hartley, Jeff" <[e-mail]>]

I'm volunteering for the first pass review, but others are certainly welcome to perform their own!

FYI & Thanks;
-Jeff


From: netconf <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Kent Watsen
Sent: Wednesday, May 25, 2022 8:22 AM
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Subject: [netconf] Updates posted yesterday

Regarding yesterday's update to the suite of client-server drafts, following are the Change Log entries for each draft. Please review carefully, as these drafts are eminent to be published! The only i
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Regarding yesterday's update to the suite of client-server drafts, following are the Change Log entries for each draft.  Please review carefully, as these drafts are eminent to be published!

The only item remaining is a review of the IANA modules in the SSH and TLS drafts, to see if those sections are in reasonable shape to handoff to IANA.  This is a non-blocking item, but it should be done and anyone can do it without needing to understand any of rest of the "suite of client-server drafts".  My only ask is that draft-boucadair-netmod-iana-registries is considered as part of that review.  Anyone?

Kent // contributor



Crypto-types

   *  Fixed an example to reference correct key.

   *  Fixed an example to not have line-returns around the encoding for
      a binary value.

Trust-anchors

   *  Updated Security Considerations section to address comment
      received from Carl Wallace.

   *  Fixed examples to not have line-returns around "identity"
      encodings.

   *  Fixed a couple tree diagrams to not create diagrams for
      "groupings" too.

   *  Added "if-feature central-truststore-supported" to top-level
      "trustore" container.

Keystore

   *  Added a "term" for "key" (IEEE liaison).

   *  Clarified draft text to ensure proper use of the "key" term (IEEE liaison).

   *  Added statement that built-in keys SHOULD NOT be cleartext (IEEE liaison).

   *  Added "if-feature central-keystore-supported" to top-level
      "keystore" container.

Tcp-client-server

   *  NO UPDATE.

Ssh-client-server

   *  Fixed example to not have line-returns around "identity" values.

   *  Fixed examples to not include "xmlns:algs".

   *  Added an example for the "generate-public-key" RPC.


Tls-client-server

   *  Fixed draft text to refer to new "identity" values (e.g., s/tls-
      1.3/tls13).

   *  Added ietf-tls-common:generate-public-key() RPC.


Http-client-server

   *  NO UPDATE.

Netconf-client-server

   *  Added feature "central-netconf-client-supported" to top-level node
      "netconf-client".

   *  Added feature "central-netconf-server-supported" to top-level node
      "netconf-server".

   *  Clarified container "netconf-client-parameters" description
      statement.

   *  Removed unneccesary "xmlns:x509c2n" in a NETCONF server
      configuration example.


Restconf-client-server

   *  Added feature "central-restconf-client-supported" to top-level
      node "restconf-client".

   *  Added feature "central-restconf-server-supported" to top-level
      node "restconf-server".