Re: [netconf] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Mon, 04 November 2019 13:57 UTC

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Hi,

Trimming to open issues...

Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> wrote:
> Thanks Martin, see reply inline below.
> 
> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: Martin Bjorklund [mailto:mbj@tail-f.com] 

> o  Abstract and Introduction
> 
>   These both contain:
> 
>     The reset operation may be used e.g. during initial
>     zero-touch configuration 
> 
>   and in the Introduction there's a reference to RFC 8572.
> 
>   But what does this actually mean?
> [Qin]: It means the key word zero-touch comes from RFC8572.

I get that part.  I was wondering about the meaning of the sentence.
How can "reset" be used "during initial zero-touch configuration"?


> o  Section 4
> 
>   The YANG module contains the boilerplate text from RFC 8174, but the
>   module doesn't use 8174-language, so I suggest the boilerplate text
>   is removed.
> [Qin]: "MAY" key word is used in this draft, I am not sure to remove boilerplate text.

But MAY isn't used in the *YANG module*.  The boilerplate in section
1.1 should stay, but the boilerplate in the YANG module should be
removed.



/martin