[Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717 (2746)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 09 March 2011 13:07 UTC

To: balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com, mbj@tail-f.com, dromasca@avaya.com, rbonica@juniper.net, bertietf@bwijnen.net, mehmet.ersue@nsn.com
From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Message-Id: <20110309130851.09562E0710@rfc-editor.org>
Date: Wed, 09 Mar 2011 05:08:51 -0800
Cc: netconf@ietf.org, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
Subject: [Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717 (2746)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5717,
"Partial Lock Remote Procedure Call (RPC) for NETCONF".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5717&eid=2746

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Mehmet Ersue <mehmet.ersue@nsn.com>

Section: Appendix C

Original Text
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   Step 6 - Lock user Joe

   <nc:rpc
     xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"
     xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"
         message-id="104">
     <partial-lock>
       <select xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">
         /usr:top/usr:users/user[usr:name="Joe"]"
       </select>
     </partial-lock>
   </nc:rpc>

   The NETCONF server grants the partial lock.  The scope of this second
   lock includes only the <user> node with name Joe.  The lock protects
   all data below this particular <user> node.

   Step 7 - Receive lock

   <nc:rpc-reply
     xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"
     xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"
     message-id="104">
       <lock-id>2</lock-id>
       <locked-node xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">
           /usr:top/usr:users/user[usr:name="Joe"]"
       </locked-node>
   </nc:rpc-reply>


Corrected Text
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   Step 6 - Lock user Joe

   <nc:rpc
     xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"
     xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"
         message-id="104">
     <partial-lock>
        <select xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">
          /usr:top/usr:users/usr:user[usr:name="Joe"]
        </select>
     </partial-lock>
   </nc:rpc>

   The NETCONF server grants the partial lock.  The scope of this second
   lock includes only the <user> node with name Joe.  The lock protects
   all data below this particular <user> node.

   Step 7 - Receive lock

   <nc:rpc-reply
     xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0"
     xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:partial-lock:1.0"
     message-id="104">
       <lock-id>2</lock-id>
        <locked-node xmlns:usr="http://example.com/users">
            /usr:top/usr:users/usr:user[usr:name="Joe"]
        </locked-node>
   </nc:rpc-reply>


Notes
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- Appendix C is non-normative.
- The instance identifier: /usr:top/usr:users/user[usr:name="Joe"]" 
must be replaced with:     /usr:top/usr:users/usr:user[usr:name="Joe"]

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RFC5717 (draft-ietf-netconf-partial-lock-11)
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Title               : Partial Lock Remote Procedure Call (RPC) for NETCONF
Publication Date    : December 2009
Author(s)           : B. Lengyel, M. Bjorklund
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network Configuration
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

[Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717 (27… RFC Errata System
Re: [Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717… Martin Bjorklund
Re: [Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717… Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich)
Re: [Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5717… Martin Bjorklund