[netconf] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-trace-ctx-headers-04.txt

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Hi Authors, 

Some easy-to-fix comments:

(1) normative refs and unused terms

CURRENT: 
   Additionally, the document utilizes the following abbreviations:

   OTLP:  OpenTelemetry protocol as defined by [OpenTelemetry]

   M.E.L.T:  Metrics, Events, Logs and Traces

   gNMI:  gRPC Network Management Interface, as defined by [gNMI]

These are not used in the document. In any case, don't see why [OpenTelemetry] and [gNMI] are cited as normative.

(2) I would simply remove the following. No need to tease for a bis that may never happen

CURRENT:
Future updates
   of this document could include additional YANG modules for new
   headers' versions.

(3) nit

CURRENT:
   Section 2.1 on Error handling (Section 2.1), states that servers may
   return an error.

Cheers,
Med

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>    Title:   RESTCONF Extension to Support Trace Context Headers
>    Authors: Roque Gagliano
>             Kristian Larsson
>             Jan Lindblad
>    Name:    draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-trace-ctx-headers-04.txt
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