[netconf] Re: draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | <compare> on private-candidate(s)

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Hi James

 

I misunderstood the intention of the original wording (hence I think this
part needs another wording). I re-read the draft and particularly chapter
4.7.2.4.

 

What about this wording:

 

A <compare> [
<https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.
org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-netconf-privcand-03.html%23RFC9144&data=05%7
C02%7Cdylan.sadoun%40orange.com%7Ca148a010d099450c698308dcd43d1d69%7C90c7a20
af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638618606160803063%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb
3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C0%7C
%7C%7C&sdata=rhUXiFK0I1AnM5AaeoTq0lPEzw6JJGU8PZfeK35im7c%3D&reserved=0>
RFC9144] operation MAY be performed between the current point of the private
candidate against one of:

1.	The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch
2.	The last update point of the private candidate's branch
3.	The running configuration

 

This is detailed in Section 4.7.2.4.

 

Cordialement / Regards.

 

Dylan SADOUN

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Hi Dylan,

 

I don’t think the proposed wording is correct.  It implies (at least to me)
that you could compare between the last update point of the private
candidate and the initial creation point of the private candidate (and not
involve the current point of the private candidate at all).  This was not
the intention of the original wording.  

 

I’ve added the RFC into the text for the upcoming -05 as you suggest.

 

Thanks

 

James

 

 

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Subject: draft-ietf-netconf-privcand private candidate | <compare> on
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Hello

 

Quoting 4.5:

 

"A <compare> operation MAY be performed against:

1.	The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch
2.	Against the last update point of the private candidate's branch
3.	Against the running configuration"

 

This phrasing seems a bit obscure to me... If these are 3 different points
of comparison, wouldn't it be simpler rephrased as:

 

"A <compare> [
<https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.
org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-netconf-privcand-03.html%23RFC9144&data=05%7
C02%7Cdylan.sadoun%40orange.com%7Ca148a010d099450c698308dcd43d1d69%7C90c7a20
af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638618606160803063%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb
3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C0%7C
%7C%7C&sdata=rhUXiFK0I1AnM5AaeoTq0lPEzw6JJGU8PZfeK35im7c%3D&reserved=0>
RFC9144] operation MAY be performed against two of:

1.	The initial creation point of the private candidate's branch
2.	The last update point of the private candidate's branch
3.	The running configuration"

 

NB: I added the reference to RFC9144 as well.

 

Best regards,

Dylan Sadoun

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