Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6616)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Mon, 21 June 2021 12:23 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6616)
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Hi Kent,

I agree.  I have verified this errata.  Srihari, thanks for raising.

Regards,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
> Sent: 21 June 2021 13:07
> To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> Cc: ian.farrer@telekom.de; mikael.abrahamsson@t-systems.se; Warren
> Kumari <warren@kumari.net>; Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>;
> Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>;
> sramanathan@google.com; netconf@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6616)
> 
> This Errata should be accepted.
> 
> Obviously “SVR" should’ve been “SRV”.
> 
> K.
> 
> 
> 
> > On Jun 18, 2021, at 7:12 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> wrote:
> >
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8572,
> > "Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)".
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6616
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Srihari Ramanathan <sramanathan@google.com>
> >
> > Section: 4.2.3
> >
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> >   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
> >   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SVR records as follows.
> >
> >   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> >
> >      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
> >         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
> >         to SVR records per [RFC2782].
> >
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> >   For device-independent queries, the three bootstrapping artifacts
> >   defined in Section 3 are encoded into the SRV records as follows.
> >
> >   Artifact to SRV Record Mapping:
> >
> >      Conveyed Information:  This artifact is not supported directly.
> >         Instead, the essence of unsigned redirect information is mapped
> >         to SRV records per [RFC2782].
> >
> > Notes
> > -----
> > I believe both "SVR" are typos?
> >
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC8572 (draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-29)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)
> > Publication Date    : April 2019
> > Author(s)           : K. Watsen, I. Farrer, M. Abrahamsson
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Network Configuration
> > Area                : Operations and Management
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG

[netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (66… RFC Errata System
Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572… Kent Watsen
Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572… Rob Wilton (rwilton)