Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-22.txt

Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Wed, 06 June 2018 00:21 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-22.txt
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This update primarily addresses the issues raised in the thread titled
"a couple zerotouch-21 issues".

Also, when moving the example module to the Appendix, I updated it to 
import (by revision) the latest trust-anchors and keystore drafts.

Lastly, I modified the description of some nodes in the other YANG modules
to more closely emulate what is in draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types.

Kent // contributor