Re: [Netconf] LC on subscribed-notifications-10 review

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> Mon, 26 March 2018 06:10 UTC

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From: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
To: Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>
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Thread-Topic: [Netconf] LC on subscribed-notifications-10 review
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] LC on subscribed-notifications-10 review
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> From: Martin Bjorklund, March 22, 2018 11:25 AM
> 
> Hi,
> 
> "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> wrote:
> > Hi Balazs,
> >
> > All changes listed below should be addressed.  The results can also be
> > seen in...
> > https://github.com/netconf-wg/rfc5277bis/blob/master/draft-ietf-
> netcon
> > f-subscribed-notifications-11.txt
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Netconf <netconf-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Balazs Lengyel
> > > Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2018 7:01 PM
> > > To: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>et>; netconf@ietf.org
> > > Subject: Re: [Netconf] LC on subscribed-notifications-10 review
> > >
> > > Hello,
> > >
> > > My last call review. Sorry if some of the comments are already
> > > mentioned.
> > > I  think the document is in a good shape, ready to progress onwards
> > > (if my MAJOR comments are clarified.).
> > >
> > > Abstract:  "Also defined are delivery mechanisms for instances of
> > > the resulting notification messages."
> > > Aren't these in other drafts?
> >
> > Notification message definition mechanisms are defined in this
> > document.  But a complete solution requires a transport draft as well.
> 
> I agree with Balazs.  Shouldn't this sentence be removed?  If not, where in
> this document are these delivery mechanmisms defined?

I guess it depends on one's definition of delivery mechanisms.  To avoid all confusion, I reworded to:

This document defines mechanisms and a YANG Data Model enabling subscriber-specific subscriptions to a publisher's event streams.  Applying these elements allows a subscriber to request for and receive a continuous, custom feed of publisher generated information.

Eric

> [...]
> 
> > > P34) There really should be a filter example to show how it is
> > > applied against the notification.
> >
> > We took the same path as other YANG documents expressing XPATH or
> > subtree filters.
> >
> > In any case, filters documented for those examples should work here
> > without change.
> 
> Can you point to one such example?
> 
> 
> /martin