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Eric

I see some quirks in this I-D that I think need fixing

It lacks a note to the RFC Editor asking that XXXX be replaced with the
number assigned to the I-D

It lacks a note to the RFC Editor asking that the two dates in the YANG
module be replaced with the date of publication

I see no Copyright in the YANG module

The YANG module references

6991
7223  (which is  superseded)
7951
7540

none of which I see in the References of the I-D

Good practice is to have a section just before the YANG module itself
which lists the documents from whiuch imports are made or to which
references are made (if you simply add RFC6991 as a Reference, you will
get an unused Reference error).  See, for example, RFC8344

There are a number of Informative References which I think should be
Normative namely
8040
5246
6241
6242
7950

Tom Petch