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Dear Med,

I integrated the proposed changes: =
https://github.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/blob/master/draft-ietf-net=
conf-udp-client-server-03.txt

Diff of last commit: =
https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?url_1=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.c=
om/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/2e8ac0ec7efcd333e156352313be8c828e5a4e5b/d=
raft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt&url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubuserc=
ontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-clie=
nt-server-03.txt

Diff to last iteration: =
https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=3Ddraft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-s=
erver-02&url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-s=
erver/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt=20

Yes, regarding the default, I=E2=80=99ll wait for a bit to see if other =
members from the ML have any opinions.
But yes, my reflex is also removing it.

Cheers,
Alex

> On 27 Jun 2024, at 13:28, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
>=20
> Hi Alex,
> =20
> Thanks for the follow-up and for addressing the comments.
> =20
> I confirm that issue#2 below applies for =
draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-26#section-3.1.1.
> =20
> Noted the pending point about the default. If you decide to remove the =
default, you may consider adding a note to explain why that design is a =
hurdle for better reusability.
> =20
> Please find below some comments on the candidate version:
> =20
> # Section 5.2: 6020 is authoritative here
> =20
> OLD:
>   This document requests IANA to register the following YANG modules =
in
>   the "YANG Module Names" registry [RFC8342] within the "YANG
>   Parameters" registry group.
> =20
> NEW:
>   This document requests IANA to register the following YANG modules =
in
>   the "YANG Module Names" registry [RFC6020] within the "YANG
>   Parameters" registry group.
> =20
> # Move =E2=80=9CI-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis=E2=80=9D to be listed as =
informative instead of normative.
> =20
> Thank you.
> =20
> Cheers,
> Med
> =20
> De : Alex Huang Feng <alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr =
<mailto:alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr>>=20
> Envoy=C3=A9 : jeudi 27 juin 2024 12:21
> =C3=80 : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com =
<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>>
> Cc : netconf <netconf@ietf.org <mailto:netconf@ietf.org>>
> Objet : Re: [netconf] I-D Action: =
draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-02.txt
> =20
>=20
> Dear Med,
> =20
> Thank you very much for the review and comments.
> Please see inline.
>=20
>=20
> On 18 Jun 2024, at 17:28, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com =
<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:
> =20
> Hi Alex,=20
>=20
> Thanks for this revised versions.=20
>=20
> Please find below some easy-to-fix comments:
>=20
> # Sections 2 and 3.3.
>=20
> OLD:
>       reference
>         "RFC-to-be: YANG Grouping for UDP Clients and UDP Servers";
> NEW:
>       reference
>         "RFC-to-be: YANG Groupings for UDP Clients and UDP Servers";
>=20
> # Section 2: Not sure how to interpret this feature in a module for =
managing UDP clients:
>=20
> CURRENT:
>     feature local-binding-supported {
>       description
>         "Indicates that the UDP server supports configuring local
>          bindings (i.e., the local address and local port) for
>          UDP clients.";
>     }
> =20
> It is a typo. Changed to
> Indicates that the UDP client supports configuring local
>        bindings (i.e., the local address and local port) for
>        UDP clients.
> =20
> I understand this feature as a way to advertise that the client is =
able to configure the local IP and local port.
> =20
> I guess the typo is also valid for =
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server=
-26#section-3.1.1? If not, I am missing something.
>=20
> # Section 2
>=20
> CURRENT:
>           "The local IP address/interface to bind to when sending UDP
>           messages to the remote server. INADDR_ANY ('0.0.0.0') or
>           INADDR6_ANY ('0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0' a.k.a. '::') MAY be used to
>           explicitly indicate the implicit default, that the server
>           can bind to any IPv4 or IPv6 address.";
>=20
> ## only ip-address type is defined here. I would delete the =
"interface" mention.
> ## s/MAY/may
> ## I would delete "explicitly indicate the implicit default"
>=20
> # Section 2
>=20
> OLD:
>           "The local IP port number to bind to when sending UDP
> NEW:
>           "The local port number to bind to when sending UDP
>=20
> # delete " which is the default value," or "default "0";" as there are =
redundant. I have a preference to delete "default "0";" as this is =
reusable grouping and my prevent some uses.=20
> =20
> I already encountered this =E2=80=9Cissue" in UDP-notif, how to use =
this grouping with a YANG model that implements a mandatory port. YANG =
does not allow refining a default statement to a mandatory field.
> I am totally okay removing the default =E2=80=9C0=E2=80=9D, but also =
wanted some consistency with the tcp-client-server draft. That=E2=80=99s =
is why I implemented default.
> Is there any other thoughts about this from the WG? Should I remove =
the default in the next iteration?
>=20
>=20
>=20
> # Section 3.2: Per https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc5952
>=20
> OLD: <local-address>2001:DB8::0</local-address>
> NEW: <local-address>2001:db8::0</local-address>
>=20
> # Security: I would follow the template at =
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-11#name=
-security-considerations-sect
> =20
> Changed
> =20
> For the rest, all integrated to the next iteration: =
https://github.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/blob/master/draft-ietf-net=
conf-udp-client-server-03.txt
> =20
> rfcdiff: =
https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=3Ddraft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-s=
erver-02&url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-s=
erver/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt
> =20
> I will submit before cutoff.
> =20
> Cheers,
> Alex
>=20
>=20
>=20
> # Section 5.1:
>=20
> OLD:  IANA is requested to assign two new URI from the IETF XML =
Registry
> NEW:  IANA is requested to assign two new URIs from the IETF XML =
Registry
>=20
> # Section 5.2:
>=20
> OLD:
>   This document also requests two new YANG module names in the YANG
>   Module Names registry [RFC8342] with the following suggestions:
>=20
> NEW:
>   This document requests IANA to register the following YANG modules =
in
>   the "YANG Module Names" registry [RFC6020] within the "YANG
>   Parameters" registry group.
>=20
> Cheers,
> Med
>=20
>=20
> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Alex Huang Feng <alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr =
<mailto:alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr>>
> Envoy=C3=A9 : mardi 18 juin 2024 17:08
> =C3=80 : netconf <netconf@ietf.org <mailto:netconf@ietf.org>>
> Cc : i-d-announce@ietf.org <mailto:i-d-announce@ietf.org>
> Objet : [netconf] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-
> server-02.txt
>=20
>=20
> Dear NETCONF,
>=20
> Following the feedback from the last IETF WG meeting, I updated
> the client-server groupings mimicking the tcp client-server
> groupings.
>=20
> Changes:
> - On the client-grouping, the remote-address is a generic
> inet:host instead of the limited inet:ip-address-no-zone and
> supports local bindings
> - On the server-grouping, it is a list of local binding
> addresses.
> - Added some examples of usage.
>=20
> We welcome any new comment on this draft.
>=20
> Regards,
>=20
> Alex
>=20
>=20
> On 18 Jun 2024, at 16:57, internet-drafts@ietf.org =
<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>=20
> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-02.txt is
> now available.
>=20
> It is a work item of the Network Configuration (NETCONF) WG of
> the IETF.
>=20
>=20
>  Title:   YANG Groupings for UDP Clients and UDP Servers
>  Authors: Alex Huang Feng
>           Pierre Francois
>           Kent Watsen
>  Name:    draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-02.txt
>  Pages:   12
>  Dates:   2024-06-18
>=20
> Abstract:
>=20
>  This document defines two YANG 1.1 modules to support the
>  configuration of UDP clients and UDP servers.
>=20
> =
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-webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;">Dear =
Med,<div><br></div><div>I integrated the proposed changes:&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://github.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/blob/master/draft-=
ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt">https://github.com/netconf-wg/udp-c=
lient-server/blob/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt</a></=
div><div><br></div><div>Diff of last commit:&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?url_1=3Dhttps://raw.githubuserc=
ontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/2e8ac0ec7efcd333e156352313be8c828e=
5a4e5b/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt&amp;url_2=3Dhttps://raw=
.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/master/draft-ietf-netc=
onf-udp-client-server-03.txt">https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?url_1=3Dh=
ttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/2e8ac0ec7efc=
d333e156352313be8c828e5a4e5b/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt&a=
mp;url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/=
master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt</a></div><div><br></div=
><div>Diff to last iteration:&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=3Ddraft-ietf-netconf-udp-=
client-server-02&amp;url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/=
udp-client-server/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt">http=
s://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=3Ddraft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-serve=
r-02&amp;url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-s=
erver/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt</a>&nbsp;</div><d=
iv><br></div><div>Yes, regarding the default, I=E2=80=99ll wait for a =
bit to see if other members from the ML have any opinions.</div><div>But =
yes, my reflex is also removing =
it.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers,</div><div>Alex<br =
id=3D"lineBreakAtBeginningOfMessage"><div><br><blockquote =
type=3D"cite"><div>On 27 Jun 2024, at 13:28, =
mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:</div><br =
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and for addressing the comments.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">I confirm that issue#2 =
below applies for =
draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-26#section-3.1.1.<o:p></o:p></span></=
div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">Noted the pending point =
about the default. If you decide to remove the default, you may consider =
adding a note to explain why that design is a hurdle for better =
reusability.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">Please find below some =
comments on the candidate version:<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;"># Section 5.2: 6020 is =
authoritative here<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;">OLD:<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">&nbsp; This document =
requests IANA to register the following YANG modules =
in<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">&nbsp; the "YANG Module =
Names" registry [RFC8342] within the "YANG<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;">&nbsp; Parameters" registry =
group.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;">NEW:<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">&nbsp; This document =
requests IANA to register the following YANG modules =
in<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">&nbsp; the "YANG Module =
Names" registry [RFC6020] within the "YANG<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;">&nbsp; Parameters" registry =
group.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;"># Move =E2=80=9C</span><sp=
an lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 8.5pt; font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;; background: rgb(136, 255, =
255);">I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">=E2=80=9D to be listed =
as informative instead of normative.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;;">Thank =
you.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;">Med<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span lang=3D"EN-US" =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></div><div style=3D"border-width: =
medium medium medium 1.5pt; border-style: none none none solid; =
border-color: currentcolor currentcolor currentcolor blue; border-image: =
none; padding: 0cm 0cm 0cm 4pt;"><div><div style=3D"border-width: 1pt =
medium medium; border-style: solid none none; border-color: rgb(225, =
225, 225) currentcolor currentcolor; border-image: none; padding: 3pt =
0cm 0cm;"><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif;"><b>De&nbsp;:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Alex Huang Feng &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr" style=3D"color: blue; =
text-decoration: underline;">alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr</a>&gt;<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br><b>Envoy=C3=A9&nbsp;:</b>=
<span class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>jeudi 27 juin 2024 =
12:21<br><b>=C3=80&nbsp;:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET =
&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com" style=3D"color: =
blue; text-decoration: =
underline;">mohamed.boucadair@orange.com</a>&gt;<br><b>Cc&nbsp;:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>netconf &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:netconf@ietf.org" style=3D"color: blue; text-decoration: =
underline;">netconf@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br><b>Objet&nbsp;:</b><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>Re: [netconf] I-D Action: =
draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-02.txt<o:p></o:p></div></div></div><d=
iv style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><br>Dear =
Med,<o:p></o:p></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Thank you very =
much for the review and comments.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;">Please see inline.<o:p></o:p></div><div><div style=3D"margin:=
 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><br><br><o:p></o:p></div><blockquote style=3D"margin-top: =
5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">On 18 Jun 2024, at 17:28,<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
href=3D"mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com" style=3D"color: blue; =
text-decoration: underline;">mohamed.boucadair@orange.com</a><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>wrote:<o:p></o:p></div></div>=
<div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span =
style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">Hi =
Alex,<span class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br><br>Thanks =
for this revised versions.<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><br><br>Please find below =
some easy-to-fix comments:<br><br># Sections 2 and =
3.3.<br><br>OLD:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;reference<br>&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"RFC-to-be: YANG Grouping for =
UDP Clients and UDP =
Servers";<br>NEW:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;reference<br>&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"RFC-to-be: YANG Groupings =
for UDP Clients and UDP Servers";<br><br># Section 2: Not sure how to =
interpret this feature in a module for managing UDP =
clients:<br><br>CURRENT:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;feature =
local-binding-supported =
{<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;description<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"Indicates that the UDP server supports =
configuring =
local<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;bindings =
(i.e., the local address and local port) =
for<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;UDP =
clients.";<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;}</span><o:p></o:p></div></div></blo=
ckquote><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: =
Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;">It is a typo. Changed =
to<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; line-height: 13.5pt; =
background: white;"><span style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;; =
color: rgb(162, 86, 55);">Indicates that the UDP client supports =
configuring local</span><span style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier =
New&quot;; color: rgb(54, 54, =
54);"><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; line-height: 13.5pt; =
background: white;"><span style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;; =
color: rgb(162, 86, 55);">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; bindings =
(i.e., the local address and local port) for</span><span =
style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;; color: rgb(54, 54, =
54);"><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; line-height: 13.5pt; =
background: white;"><span style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;; =
color: rgb(162, 86, 55);">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; UDP =
clients.</span><span style=3D"font-family: &quot;Courier New&quot;; =
color: rgb(54, 54, =
54);"><o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin:=
 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I understand =
this feature as a way to advertise that the client is able to configure =
the local IP and local port.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I guess the =
typo is also valid for&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-clien=
t-server-26#section-3.1.1" style=3D"color: blue; text-decoration: =
underline;">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-c=
lient-server-26#section-3.1.1</a>? If not, I am missing =
something.<o:p></o:p></div></div></div><div><blockquote =
style=3D"margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, =
sans-serif;"><br># Section =
2<br><br>CURRENT:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;"The local IP address/interface to bind to when sending =
UDP<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;message=
s to the remote server.<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><span =
style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">INADDR_ANY =
('0.0.0.0') =
or<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;INADDR6_=
ANY ('0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0' a.k.a. '::') MAY be used =
to<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;explicit=
ly indicate the implicit default, that the =
server<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;can =
bind to any IPv4 or IPv6 address.";<br><br>## only ip-address type is =
defined here. I would delete the "interface" mention.<br>## =
s/MAY/may<br>## I would delete "explicitly indicate the implicit =
default"<br><br># Section =
2<br><br>OLD:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;"The local IP port number to bind to when sending =
UDP<br>NEW:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;"The local port number to bind to when sending UDP<br><br># delete " =
which is the default value," or "default "0";" as there are redundant. I =
have a preference to delete "default "0";" as this is reusable grouping =
and my prevent some uses.<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><o:p></o:p></div></div=
></blockquote><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I already =
encountered this =E2=80=9Cissue" in UDP-notif, how to use this grouping =
with a YANG model that implements a mandatory port. YANG does not allow =
refining a default statement to a mandatory =
field.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I am totally okay removing the =
default =E2=80=9C0=E2=80=9D, but also wanted some consistency with the =
tcp-client-server draft. That=E2=80=99s is why I implemented =
default.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Is there any other =
thoughts about this from the WG? Should I remove the default in the next =
iteration?<o:p></o:p></div></div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><br><br><o:p></o:p></div><blockquote style=3D"margin-top: =
5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; =
font-family: Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br># Section 3.2: Per<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><a =
href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc5952" style=3D"color: =
blue; text-decoration: underline;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; =
font-family: Helvetica, =
sans-serif;">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc5952</span></a><span=
 style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, =
sans-serif;"><br><br>OLD: =
&lt;local-address&gt;2001:DB8::0&lt;/local-address&gt;<br>NEW: =
&lt;local-address&gt;2001:db8::0&lt;/local-address&gt;<br><br># =
Security: I would follow the template at<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span></span><a =
href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis=
-11#name-security-considerations-sect" style=3D"color: blue; =
text-decoration: underline;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: =
Helvetica, =
sans-serif;">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc84=
07bis-11#name-security-considerations-sect</span></a><o:p></o:p></div></di=
v></blockquote><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;">Changed<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">For the rest, =
all integrated to the next iteration:&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://github.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/blob/master/draft-=
ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt" style=3D"color: blue; =
text-decoration: =
underline;">https://github.com/netconf-wg/udp-client-server/blob/master/dr=
aft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt</a><o:p></o:p></div></div><div><=
div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;">rfcdiff:&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=3Ddraft-ietf-netconf-udp-=
client-server-02&amp;url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf-wg/=
udp-client-server/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt" =
style=3D"color: blue; text-decoration: =
underline;">https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=3Ddraft-ietf-netconf-=
udp-client-server-02&amp;url_2=3Dhttps://raw.githubusercontent.com/netconf=
-wg/udp-client-server/master/draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-03.txt</=
a><o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I will submit =
before cutoff.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;">Cheers,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: =
0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;">Alex<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><br><br><o:p></o:p></div><blockquote style=3D"margin-top: =
5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: =
11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; =
font-family: Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br># Section 5.1:<br><br>OLD: =
&nbsp;IANA is requested to assign two new URI from the IETF XML =
Registry<br>NEW: &nbsp;IANA is requested to assign two new URIs from the =
IETF XML Registry<br><br># Section 5.2:<br><br>OLD:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;This =
document also requests two new YANG module names in the =
YANG<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;Module Names registry [RFC8342] with the following =
suggestions:<br><br>NEW:<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;This document requests IANA to =
register the following YANG modules in<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;the "YANG Module =
Names" registry [RFC6020] within the "YANG<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;Parameters" =
registry group.<br><br>Cheers,<br>Med<br><br style=3D"caret-color: =
rgb(0, 0, 0); font-variant-caps: normal; text-align: start; =
-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; word-spacing: =
0px;"><br></span><o:p></o:p></div><blockquote style=3D"margin-top: 5pt; =
margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; =
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; =
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d'origine-----<br>De&nbsp;: Alex Huang Feng &lt;<a =
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underline;">alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr</a>&gt;<br>Envoy=C3=A9&nbsp;: =
mardi 18 juin 2024 17:08<br>=C3=80&nbsp;: netconf &lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:netconf@ietf.org" style=3D"color: blue; text-decoration: =
underline;">netconf@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>Cc&nbsp;:<span =
class=3D"apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
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text-decoration: underline;">i-d-announce@ietf.org</a><br>Objet&nbsp;: =
[netconf] Re: I-D Action: =
draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-<br>server-02.txt<br><br><br>Dear =
NETCONF,<br><br>Following the feedback from the last IETF WG meeting, I =
updated<br>the client-server groupings mimicking the tcp =
client-server<br>groupings.<br><br>Changes:<br>- On the client-grouping, =
the remote-address is a generic<br>inet:host instead of the limited =
inet:ip-address-no-zone and<br>supports local bindings<br>- On the =
server-grouping, it is a list of local binding<br>addresses.<br>- Added =
some examples of usage.<br><br>We welcome any new comment on this =
draft.<br><br>Regards,<br><br>Alex<br><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><blo=
ckquote style=3D"margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, =
sans-serif;">On 18 Jun 2024, at 16:57,<span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span><a =
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text-decoration: underline;">internet-drafts@ietf.org</a><span =
class=3D"Apple-converted-space">&nbsp;</span>wrote:<br><br>Internet-Draft =
draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-02.txt =
is<o:p></o:p></span></div></blockquote><div style=3D"margin: 0cm; =
font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span =
style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">now =
available.<br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><blockquote style=3D"margin-top:=
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font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; =
font-family: Helvetica, sans-serif;">It is a work item of the Network =
Configuration (NETCONF) WG of<o:p></o:p></span></div></blockquote><div =
style=3D"margin: 0cm; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, =
sans-serif;">the IETF.<br><br><o:p></o:p></span></div><blockquote =
style=3D"margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;"><p class=3D"MsoNormal" =
style=3D"margin: 0cm 0cm 12pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 9pt; font-family: Helvetica, =
sans-serif;"><br>&nbsp;Title: &nbsp;&nbsp;YANG Groupings for UDP Clients =
and UDP Servers<br>&nbsp;Authors: Alex Huang =
Feng<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Pierre=
 =
Francois<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Ke=
nt Watsen<br>&nbsp;Name: =
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;draft-ietf-netconf-udp-client-server-02.txt<br>&nbsp;Pag=
es: &nbsp;&nbsp;12<br>&nbsp;Dates: =
&nbsp;&nbsp;2024-06-18<br><br>Abstract:<br><br>&nbsp;This document =
defines two YANG 1.1 modules to support the<br>&nbsp;configuration of =
UDP clients and UDP =
servers.<o:p></o:p></span></p></blockquote></blockquote><div =
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