Re: [Netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf-04: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Mon, 01 October 2018 14:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Netconf] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf-04: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks!
Alissa

> On Oct 1, 2018, at 3:01 AM, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in>> wrote:
>> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf-04: No Objection
>> 
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>> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
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>> 
>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-restconf/
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> 
>> Please apply the changes resulting from the Gen-ART review: either removing or
>> clarifying the text about 'ds-ephemeral'
> 
> I have applied the text suggested by Russ:
> 
>  If a server implements other datastores, such as the example
>  datastore "ds-ephemeral" in the module "example-ds-ephemeral",
>  the server would implement the resource {+restconf}/ds/example-
>  ds-ephemeral:ds-ephemeral.
> 
>> , adding clarifying text
>> about GET,
> 
> We (the authors) do not understand what edits are required for this.
> The text in the draft is:
> 
>   o  [RFC8040], Section 3.5.4, paragraph 3 does not apply when
>      interacting with any resource under {+restconf}/ds.
> 
> 
>> and
>> adding the missing ')' in Section 5.
> 
> Done!
> 
> 
> /martin