Re: [netext] WGLC: Flow mobility I-D <draft-ietf-netext-pmipv6-flowmob-14>

Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Mon, 16 November 2015 08:30 UTC

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From: Carlos =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Jes=FAs?= Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
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Subject: Re: [netext] WGLC: Flow mobility I-D <draft-ietf-netext-pmipv6-flowmob-14>
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Hi Daniel,

Thanks a lot for the review. I'll incorporate the comments in the next
revision once the WGLC is finished.

Carlos

On Fri, 2015-11-13 at 12:57 +0000, Daniel Corujo wrote:
> Dear all,
> 
> I have also read this draft and I fully support its publication.
> Moreover, I have identified some textual aspects that, despite not
> impacting the technical understanding of the document, could be
> improved:
> 
> - Page 3, 1st paragraph, line 5, “entity detecting THE Mobile
> Node’s…”
> - Page 3, 3rd paragraph, line 4, “… by the PMIPv6b network AND, ii)…”
> - Page 6, 3rd paragraph, line 7, “… gateway TO indicate …”
> - Page 7, 2nd paragraph, line 14, “At A certain point…”
> - Page 8, 2nd paragraph, line 4, “Note that (comma) in this case …”
> - Page 10, 2nd paragraph, line 3 , “… a Flow Mobility Indication …”
> - Page 17, 2nd paragraph, line 7, “… classify the packet of flows
> basED on specific …”
> 
> Thank you and best regards,
>  
> 
> Daniel Corujo, Ph.D., Research Fellow
> Instituto de Telecomunicações - Aveiro, Portugal	
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> 
> > On 11 Nov 2015, at 06:52 , Jong-Hyouk Lee <jonghyouk@gmail.com>;
> > wrote:
> > 
> > Hi all
> > 
> > I have read this document. It is ready for publication as it
> > contains concrete procedures for flow mobility in PMIPv6.
> > 
> > Thanks.
> > --
> > Jong-Hyouk Lee, living somewhere between /dev/null and /dev/random
> > Protocol Engineering Lab., Sangmyung University
> > 
> > #email: jonghyouk@gmail.com
> > #webpage: https://sites.google.com/site/hurryon
> > 
> > > On Nov 4, 2015, at 5:35 AM, Basavaraj Patil <bpatil1@gmail.com>;
> > > wrote:
> > > 
> > > 
> > > Hello,
> > > 
> > > This is the start of the last call for the WG I-D: Proxy Mobile
> > > IPv6 Extensions to Support Flow Mobility
> > > 
> > >                   draft-ietf-netext-pmipv6-flowmob-14
> > > 
> > > Please review and submit your comments by Nov 20, 2015.
> > > 
> > > The I-D is intended to be progressed as a standards track
> > > document. 
> > > 
> > > -- 
> > > Basavaraj Patil
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