Re: [netext] WGLC: Flow mobility I-D <draft-ietf-netext-pmipv6-flowmob-14>

Daniel Corujo <dcorujo@av.it.pt> Fri, 13 November 2015 12:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netext] WGLC: Flow mobility I-D <draft-ietf-netext-pmipv6-flowmob-14>
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Dear all,

I have also read this draft and I fully support its publication. Moreover, I have identified some textual aspects that, despite not impacting the technical understanding of the document, could be improved:

- Page 3, 1st paragraph, line 5, “entity detecting THE Mobile Node’s…”
- Page 3, 3rd paragraph, line 4, “… by the PMIPv6b network AND, ii)…”
- Page 6, 3rd paragraph, line 7, “… gateway TO indicate …”
- Page 7, 2nd paragraph, line 14, “At A certain point…”
- Page 8, 2nd paragraph, line 4, “Note that (comma) in this case …”
- Page 10, 2nd paragraph, line 3 , “… a Flow Mobility Indication …”
- Page 17, 2nd paragraph, line 7, “… classify the packet of flows basED on specific …”

Thank you and best regards,
 

Daniel Corujo, Ph.D., Research Fellow
Instituto de Telecomunicações - Aveiro, Portugal	
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> On 11 Nov 2015, at 06:52 , Jong-Hyouk Lee <jonghyouk@gmail.com>; wrote:
> 
> Hi all
> 
> I have read this document. It is ready for publication as it contains concrete procedures for flow mobility in PMIPv6.
> 
> Thanks.
> --
> Jong-Hyouk Lee, living somewhere between /dev/null and /dev/random
> Protocol Engineering Lab., Sangmyung University
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> #email: jonghyouk@gmail.com <mailto:jonghyouk@gmail.com>
> #webpage: https://sites.google.com/site/hurryon <https://sites.google.com/site/hurryon>
>> On Nov 4, 2015, at 5:35 AM, Basavaraj Patil <bpatil1@gmail.com <mailto:bpatil1@gmail.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> Hello,
>> 
>> This is the start of the last call for the WG I-D: Proxy Mobile IPv6 Extensions to Support Flow Mobility
>> 
>>                   draft-ietf-netext-pmipv6-flowmob-14
>> 
>> Please review and submit your comments by Nov 20, 2015.
>> 
>> The I-D is intended to be progressed as a standards track document. 
>> 
>> -- 
>> Basavaraj Patil
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