Re: [netext] WGLC: Prefix delegation support for PMIP6 - draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip

John Kaippallimalil <John.Kaippallimalil@huawei.com> Tue, 28 May 2013 19:40 UTC

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From: John Kaippallimalil <John.Kaippallimalil@huawei.com>
To: Basavaraj Patil <bpatil1@gmail.com>, "netext@ietf.org" <netext@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip@tools.ietf.org>, "netext-chairs@tools.ietf.org" <netext-chairs@tools.ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [netext] WGLC: Prefix delegation support for PMIP6 - draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip
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Subject: Re: [netext] WGLC: Prefix delegation support for PMIP6 - draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip
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Hi, 

I've been following draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip and like the changes made in the last revision (08).
I support the draft moving forward.

A couple of minor comments:
In chapter 1 (introduction), would it be possible to clarify somewhere that as the MR moves, the 
LFN (Locally Fixed Node) does not need to know/detect when the MR has moved to a new MAG.

Second -  editorial: a few places in the draft have, "an handoff".
Perhaps that could be revised to 'a handoff'. 

John




> From: netext-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Basavaraj Patil
> Sent: Thursday, May 23, 2013 3:56 PM
> To: netext@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip@tools.ietf.org; netext-chairs@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: [netext] WGLC: Prefix delegation support for PMIP6 - draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip
>
>
> Hello,
>
> Please consider this as the start of the working group last call for
> the I-D: 
>  Prefix Delegation Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6
> <draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-08>.
>
> This I-D is intended to be progressed on the standards track. 
>
> Please review the I-D and post your comments on the mailing list.
> The WGLC will end on June 7th, 2013.
>
> I would again encourage WG members to review the document and provide
> feedback at this stage of the process itself.
>
> -Chairs
>
> -- 
> Basavaraj Patil