[netext] AD Evaluation: draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation

[Brian Haberman <[e-mail]>]

All,
     I have completed my AD evaluation of
draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation as a part of the publication
process.  This document is well-written, concise, and nearly ready for
IETF Last Call.  I only have two comments/issues I would like to see
resolved.

1. The document uses several different terms to refer to the plane
responsible for the transit of user data.  I see "user plane" and "data
plane" used within the document.  Additionally, the folks in the routing
area use the term "forwarding plane".  Unless "user plane" is a
term-of-art within the mobility space, I would suggest harmonizing the
text and using a single term (data or forwarding) to describe the plane.

2. What is the plan for the publication of the CP separation
requirements document that is referenced in this document?  It seems
rather silly to publish the solution spec before the requirements.
Should they advance together?  Incorporate the requirements into this
document?

Once we iron these issues out, the publication process can proceed.

Regards,
Brian