Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-01
Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Mon, 18 December 2017 14:57 UTC
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Subject: Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-01
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Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> wrote: > Dear all, > > In order not to be the bottleneck in the process, here is my AD review > of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-01 > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis/> > > Editorial: > > - > An interface is identified by its name, which is unique within the > server. This property is captured in the "interface-ref"_and_ > typedef, which other YANG modules SHOULD use when they need to > reference an interface. > > NEW: > An interface is identified by its name, which is unique within the > server. This property is captured in the "interface-ref" > typedef, which other YANG modules SHOULD use when they need to > reference an interface. Ok, now fixed. > > - > Note that NETCONF and SNMP may > differ in the time granularity in which they provide access to the > counters. > > I guess we want to remove the reference to NETCONF? > Proposal: > Note the server that implements the YANG module and the SNMP Agent may > differ in the time granularity in which they provide access to the > counters. Ok, fixed. > - > We want to mention that "or:" comes from "ietf-origin@2017-08-17.yang" > in draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores I added: This example uses the "origin" annotation, which is defined in the module "ietf-origin" [I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores]. (I added this text to rfc7277bis as well). /martin > > <rpc-reply > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0" > message-id="101"> > <data> > <interfaces > xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-interfaces" > xmlns:ianaift="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:iana-if-type" > xmlns:vlan="http://example.com/vlan" > xmlns:or="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-origin"> > > <interface or:origin="or:intended"> > <name>eth0</name> > <type>ianaift:ethernetCsmacd</type> > <enabled>false</enabled> > <admin-status>down</admin-status> > <oper-status>down</oper-status> > <if-index>2</if-index> > <phys-address>00:01:02:03:04:05</phys-address> > <statistics> > <discontinuity-time> > 2013-04-01T03:00:00+00:00 > </discontinuity-time> > <!-- counters now shown here --> > </statistics> > </interface> > > Regards, Benoit (as OPS AD) >
- [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bi… Benoit Claise
- Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc72… Martin Bjorklund
- Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc72… Benoit Claise