Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7313)
Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Wed, 18 January 2023 18:32 UTC
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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7313)
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There was a lot of discussion on the usage of what prefix should be used when importing a module, possibly after this draft was published. However, it is a BCP, and most tools will not complain if a prefix other than what is defined in the module is used. I am not sure if a BCP rises to the level of an errata. Thanks. > On Jan 18, 2023, at 7:02 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8519, > "YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7313 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> > > Section: A.1 > > Original Text > ------------- > The following figure is the tree diagram of example-newco-acl. In > this example, /ietf-acl:acls/ietf-acl:acl/ietf-acl:aces/ietf-acl:ace/ > ietf-acl:matches are augmented with two new choices: protocol- > payload-choice and metadata. The protocol-payload-choice uses a > grouping with an enumeration of all supported protocol values. > Metadata matches apply to fields associated with the packet, that are > not in the packet header, such as overall packet length. In another > example, /ietf-acl:acls/ietf-acl:acl/ietf-acl:aces/ietf-acl:ace/ > ietf-acl:actions are augmented with a new choice of actions. > > Corrected Text > -------------- > The following figure is the tree diagram of example-newco-acl. In > this example, /acl:acls/acl:acl/acl:aces/acl:ace/acl:matches > are augmented with two new choices: protocol-payload-choice and > metadata. The protocol-payload-choice uses a > grouping with an enumeration of all supported protocol values. > Metadata matches apply to fields associated with the packet, that are > not in the packet header, such as overall packet length. In another > example, /acl:acls/acl:acl/acl:aces/acl:ace/acl:actions > are augmented with a new choice of actions. > > Notes > ----- > The prefix is "acl" not "ietf-acl" > > == > module ietf-access-control-list { > yang-version 1.1; > namespace "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-access-control-list"; > prefix acl; > ... > == > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC8519 (draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-21) > -------------------------------------- > Title : YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs) > Publication Date : March 2019 > Author(s) : M. Jethanandani, S. Agarwal, L. Huang, D. Blair > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Network Modeling > Area : Operations and Management > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanandani@gmail.com
- [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (731… RFC Errata System
- Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Eliot Lear
- Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Mahesh Jethanandani
- Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Mahesh Jethanandani
- Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Kent Watsen
- Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 … Chris Smiley