Re: [netmod] *one* week 2nd WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-07

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Wed, 20 December 2017 11:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] *one* week 2nd WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-07
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On December 19, 2017 3:31:34 PM Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> wrote:

> Hi Lou,
>
> Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote:
>> Hi,
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>> 3) A minor point, the document uses the terms boot and reboot.  I
>> suspect that these terms are intended to cover any full or partial,
>> e.g., protocol, restart operation supported on a system - which may not
>> include a full boot.  I think the document needs to be clear on this
>> point.  Perhaps just add a definition, or note that full and partial
>> restart operations are included when the document refers to boot and reboot.
>
> RFC 6241 uses the same terms, so using them is at least consistent
> with that document.

Umm, so are pre-NMDA datastores.

>  I'm not sure I think they need to be defined in
> this document.

If the text above is accurate, I think something along its lined along its 
lined should be added.  If not accurate, then I think you have a new point 
to clarify...

Lou


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