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Re: [netmod] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: (with COMMENT)

"Clyde Wildes (cwildes)" <cwildes@cisco.com> Thu, 08 March 2018 21:28 UTC

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From: "Clyde Wildes (cwildes)" <cwildes@cisco.com>
To: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: (with COMMENT)
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Alexey,

Your minor comments are addressed below…

On 3/6/18, 12:06 PM, "Alexey Melnikov" <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> wrote:

    Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: No Objection
    
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    COMMENT:
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    Thank you for this document.
    
    I also prefer for TCP to be documented, if used in real world.
    
    Some minor comments:
    
    1) Please add a Normative Reference for the file: URI RFC (RFC 8089) when you
    mention it for the first time.

[clw] Accepted
    
    2) On page 19:
    
    Example: compare->equals and action->no-match means
    messages that have a severity that is not equal to the
    specified severity will be logged.";
    
    Do you mean "action->block" instead of "action->no-match"?

[clw] An equals compare with action no-match means log the message, not block it.
    
    3) When logging to file: how is the file name constructed from the name file:
    URI if multiple files are preserved by the system? E.g. if the log file is
    rotated daily and 5 last files are preserved, how does each individual filename
    look? If I understood how this is used, this needs more clarification.

[clw] We decided to leave this for the implementer as file systems may be different for different implementations.
    
    4) Nit: on page 18, typo in "spectify"

[clw] Accepted  

Thanks,

Clyde

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