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Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7312)

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Mon, 30 January 2023 23:12 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7312)
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Rob,

Errata should be accepted.

Kent


> On Jan 18, 2023, at 9:29 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8519,
> "YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7312
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
> 
> Section: A.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>   The "example-newco-acl" module is an example of a company's
>   proprietary model that augments the "ietf-acl" module.  It shows how
>   to use 'augment' with an XML Path Language (XPath) expression to add
>   additional match criteria, actions, and default actions for when no
>   ACE matches are found.  All these are company proprietary extensions
>   or system feature extensions.  "example-newco-acl" is just an
>   example, and it is expected that vendors will create their own
>   proprietary models.
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>   The "example-newco-acl" module is an example of a company's
>   proprietary model that augments the "ietf-access-control-list" module.  It shows how
>   to use 'augment' with an XML Path Language (XPath) expression to add
>   additional match criteria, actions, and default actions for when no
>   ACE matches are found.  All these are company proprietary extensions
>   or system feature extensions.  "example-newco-acl" is just an
>   example, and it is expected that vendors will create their own
>   proprietary models.
> 
> Notes
> -----
> There is no "ietf-acl" module in the document.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8519 (draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-21)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)
> Publication Date    : March 2019
> Author(s)           : M. Jethanandani, S. Agarwal, L. Huang, D. Blair
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Modeling
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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