[netmod] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-16

Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 26 September 2024 16:09 UTC

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Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-16
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2024-09-26
IETF LC End Date: 2024-10-08
IESG Telechat date: Unknown


Summary: Ready with Nits


Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

Please add references for the two resolved errata:
 - https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid4076, and
 - https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5105.


Nits:

None.