Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-14

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Wed, 18 October 2017 06:45 UTC

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Hi,

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> wrote:
> I was also encouraged to provide comments.  A couple (new?) minor ones...
> 
> Section 3.4:
> - If a tree diagram is included for an augmented model, it SHOULD
> contain the integrated of the augmented model.  I.e., use the pyang
> -f command to generate the tree so that you can explicitly see the
> schema elements imported  

I agree that it would be good if 3.4 talks about this case.

But I think that the recommendation should be that the "imported tree"
just shows the structure (containers and lists), but not all other
nodes.  For an example of what I mean, see Section 2 of RFC 7277.



/martin