[netmod] Re: WGLC on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Tue, 22 October 2024 15:29 UTC

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Med,

----------
On October 22, 2024 8:22:47 AM mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:

> Re-,
>
> Can you please indicate why you think this is a bad option? What is the harm in recording an option that matches current practice?
>

Is there an example of a published rfc that points to the full tree via a URL?

As far as I read the discussion, no one was agreeing that this approach was a good idea.

Thanks,
Lou

> I remember that you indicated that you are using an electronic device to read docs. You can still browse the tree from the supplied URL.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> De : Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
> Envoyé : mardi 22 octobre 2024 14:00
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>; Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>; Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>
> Cc : Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>; netmod@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org; Jan Lindblad <jlindbla@cisco.com>; Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
> Objet : RE: [netmod] WGLC on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis
>
>
> Med,
>
> ----------
> On October 22, 2024 1:21:31 AM mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Lou,
>>
>> Kent rightfully raised the point about the troubles with long trees that exceeds the max line thing. I also clarified that, e.g.,
>>
>
> This is separate and unrelated topic, talking about inclusion of full trees in appendices as is currenty allowed for in rfc8340.
>
>>   *   Existing specs have provisions for tree diagrams to be included “as a whole, by one or more sections, or even by subsets of nodes” (8340)
>
> Yes I'm familiar with that text :-)
>
>>   *   There are RFCs out there that do not include them.
>>
>
> Sure, which is also allowed for in rfc8340
>
>> This is a MAY after all. We can't mandate that every doc MUST include the full tree anyway. Are you asking for that?
>
> Absolutely not. I'm not quite sure what give you that impression. I just would like to see the additional option removed as I think it is a bad idea.
>
> Thanks,
> Lou
>
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Med
>>
>>> -----Message d'origine-----
>>> De : Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net<mailto:lberger@labn.net>>
>>> Envoyé : lundi 21 octobre 2024 23:38
>>> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>>;
>>> Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com<mailto:andy@yumaworks.com>>
>>> Cc : Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanandani@gmail.com>>;
>>> netmod@ietf.org<mailto:netmod@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org>; Jan
>>> Lindblad <jlindbla@cisco.com<mailto:jlindbla@cisco.com>>; Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>>
>>> Objet : Re: [netmod] WGLC on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis
>>>
>>>
>>> Hi.
>>>
>>> Looking at today's (-20) version of the document, I still see
>>> stable pointers as an option.  I really don't see the support for
>>> this in the overall discussion and I personally think such is a
>>> *bad* idea.
>>>
>>> I'd prefer that any references to the "stable pointer" option be
>>> removed from the document.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> Lou
>>>
>>> On 10/15/2024 2:22 AM, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:
>>> > Hi Andy,
>>> >
>>> > RFC8340 leaves it to the authors to include it or not. It uses
>>> statements such as "When long diagrams are included in a document,
>>> .."
>>> >
>>> > An outcome of the discussion is that we can't impose one option
>>> here. For example, the current situation is that we do already
>>> have RFCs (RFC7407, RFC9182, RFC9291, etc.) that do not include
>>> the full trees because these are too long, the narrative text is
>>> good enough, the document itself is +150 pages, etc. Also,
>>> including pages and pages of text that exceeds the max line is not
>>> convenient for readers.
>>> >
>>> > The new guidelines include a provision for when the full tree is
>>> not included for better consistency among published documents.
>>> >
>>> > Cheers,
>>> > Med
>>> >
>>> >> -----Message d'origine-----
>>> >> De : Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com<mailto:andy@yumaworks.com>> Envoyé : lundi 14
>>> octobre 2024
>>> >> 18:24 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
>>> <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>>
>>> >> Cc : Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanandani@gmail.com>>; Lou Berger
>>> >> <lberger@labn.net<mailto:lberger@labn.net>>; netmod@ietf.org<mailto:netmod@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-netmod-
>>> >> rfc8407bis@ietf.org<mailto:rfc8407bis@ietf.org>; Jan Lindblad <jlindbla@cisco.com<mailto:jlindbla@cisco.com>>; Kent
>>> Watsen
>>> >> <kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>> Objet : Re: [netmod] WGLC on
>>> >> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis
>>> >>
>>> >>
>>> >> Hi,
>>> >>
>>> >> IMO we do not need new procedures to save the reader from a few
>>> extra
>>> >> pages of YANG tree diagram text.
>>> >>
>>> >> This is the only option that makes sense to me:
>>> >>
>>> >>     *  Include the full tree in an appendix.
>>> >>
>>> >> Andy
>>> >>
>>> >> On Sun, Oct 13, 2024 at 10:19 PM <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>>
>>> >> wrote:
>>> >>
>>> >>> Hi Mahesh,
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Yes, this refers to the main body per the structure in
>>> >> rfc7322#section-4.
>>> >>> Updated accordingly.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> The diff is available using the same link: Diff:
>>> >>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt - draft-ietf-netmod-
>>> >> rfc8407bis.txt
>>> >>
>>> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2<https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%252>
>>> >> Faut
>>> >>> hor-
>>> >> tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org><http://tools.ietf.org/>%2Fapi%2Fiddiff%3Furl_1%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fnetmod-
>>> wg.gi
>>> >>> thub.io<http://thub.io><http://thub.io/>%2Frfc8407bis%2Fdraft-ietf-netmod-
>>> >> rfc8407bis.txt%26url_2%3Dhttp
>>> >>> s%3A%2F%2Fnetmod-wg.github.io<http://2Fnetmod-wg.github.io><http://2fnetmod-wg.github.io/>%2Frfc8407bis%2Flong-
>>> trees%2Fdraft-
>>> >> ietf-n
>>> >>> etmod-
>>> >>
>>> rfc8407bis.txt&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com<http://40orange.com><http://40orange.com/>%7C3
>>> >>
>>> 60a053d61314c7851bc08dcec6c99f5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20
>>> >> %7C0
>>> >>
>>> %7C0%7C638645198411517106%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAw
>>> >> MDAi
>>> >>
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>>> >> PUXU
>>> >>> FFa2G1oGYjtnRYtC9hFJkRu5Nx%2FISQob3izoYds%3D&reserved=0>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Thanks.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Cheers,
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Med
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> *De :* Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanandani@gmail.com>> *Envoyé
>>> :*
>>> >> samedi
>>> >>> 12 octobre 2024 01:54 *À :* BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
>>> >>> <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>> *Cc :* Lou Berger
>>> >> <lberger@labn.net<mailto:lberger@labn.net>>;
>>> >>> netmod@ietf.org<mailto:netmod@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org>; Jan
>>> >> Lindblad
>>> >>> <jlindbla@cisco.com<mailto:jlindbla@cisco.com>>; Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>>
>>> *Objet
>>> >> :* Re:
>>> >>> [netmod] WGLC on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Hi Med,
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Speaking as a contributor ...
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> On Oct 11, 2024, at 8:47 AM, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
>>> wrote:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Hi Lou, Kent, all,
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Taking into account the feedback received so far, I suggest
>>> the
>>> >>> following
>>> >>> change:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> OLD:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     YANG tree diagrams provide a concise representation of a
>>> YANG
>>> >>> module
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     and SHOULD be included to help readers understand YANG
>>> module
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     structure.  If the complete tree diagram for a module
>>> becomes
>>> >> long
>>> >>>     (more than 2 pages, typically), the diagram SHOULD be
>>> split
>>> >> into
>>> >>>     several smaller diagrams (a.k.a subtrees).  For the
>>> reader's
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     convenience, a subtree should fit within a page.  If the
>>> >> complete
>>> >>>     tree diagram is too long (more than 5 pages, typically)
>>> even
>>> >> with
>>> >>>     groupings unexpanded (Section 2.2 of [RFC8340]), the
>>> authors
>>> >> SHOULD
>>> >>>     NOT include it in the document.  A stable pointer to
>>> retrieve
>>> >> the
>>> >>>     full tree MAY be included.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> NEW:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     YANG tree diagrams provide a concise representation of a
>>> YANG
>>> >>> module
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     and SHOULD be included to help readers understand YANG
>>> module
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     structure.  If the complete tree diagram for a module
>>> becomes
>>> >> long
>>> >>>     (more than 2 pages, typically), the diagram SHOULD be
>>> split
>>> >> into
>>> >>>     several smaller diagrams (a.k.a subtrees).  For the
>>> reader's
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     convenience, a subtree should fit within a page.  If the
>>> >> complete
>>> >>>     tree diagram is too long (more than 5 pages, typically)
>>> even
>>> >> with
>>> >>>     groupings unexpanded (Section 2.2 of [RFC8340]), the
>>> authors
>>> >> SHOULD
>>> >>>     NOT include it in the main document.  Instead, authors MAY
>>> >> consider
>>> >>>     the following options:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> [mj] Not clear what you mean by “main document”. Do you mean
>>> the
>>> >>> normative section of the document? If so, please edit it to
>>> say
>>> >> that.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Thanks
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     *  Provide only a stable pointer to retrieve the full
>>> tree.
>>> >> The
>>> >>> full
>>> >>>
>>> >>>        tree is thus not provided at all.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     *  Include a note about how to generate the full tree.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     *  A combination of the first and second bullets.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     *  Include the full tree in an appendix.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> For convenience:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     - Diff: Diff: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt -
>>> >>>     draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt
>>> >>>
>>> >>
>>> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2<https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%252>
>>> >> Fauthor-
>>> >> tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org><http://tools.ietf.org/>%2Fapi%2Fiddiff%3Furl_1%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fnetmod-
>>> >> wg.github.io<http://wg.github.io><http://wg.github.io/>%2Frfc8407bis%2Fdraft-ietf-netmod-
>>> >> rfc8407bis.txt%26url_2%3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fnetmod-
>>> >> wg.github.io<http://wg.github.io><http://wg.github.io/>%2Frfc8407bis%2Flong-trees%2Fdraft-ietf-netmod-
>>> >>
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>>> >>
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>>> >>
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>>> >>>     - PR:
>>> >>>
>>> >>
>>> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
>>> >> gith
>>> >>> ub.com<http://ub.com><http://ub.com/>%2Fnetmod-
>>> >> wg%2Frfc8407bis%2Fpull%2F70%2Ffiles&data=05%7C02%7Cmoh
>>> >>
>>> amed.boucadair%40orange.com<http://40orange.com><http://40orange.com/>%7C360a053d61314c7851bc08dcec6c99f5%7C9
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>>> >>
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>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Better?
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Cheers,
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Med
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> *De :* BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
>>> >>> *Envoyé :* mercredi 2 octobre 2024 11:13 *À :* 'Lou Berger'
>>> >>> <lberger@labn.net<mailto:lberger@labn.net>>; netmod@ietf.org<mailto:netmod@ietf.org>;
>>> >>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org>; Jan Lindblad (jlindbla)
>>> <
>>> >>> jlindbla@cisco.com<mailto:jlindbla@cisco.com>> *Cc :* Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>>
>>> >> *Objet
>>> >>> :* RE: [netmod] Re: WGLC on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Hi Lou,
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     - Keeping long trees in the main document is really not
>>> >> helpful to
>>> >>>     digest a module. I also know by experience that this
>>> raises
>>> >> comments,
>>> >>>     including from the IESG.
>>> >>>     - Keeping long trees that exceed 69 line max in the main
>>> or
>>> >> as an
>>> >>>     appendix is really hard to follow.
>>> >>>     - There are already RFCs out there do not include long
>>> trees,
>>> >> but a
>>> >>>     note about how to generate it. The narrative text uses
>>> small
>>> >> snippets to
>>> >>>     help readers walk through the model.
>>> >>>     - Some consistency is needed in how we document our
>>> modules +
>>> >> help
>>> >>>     authors with clear guidance (e.g., characterize what is a
>>> >> long
>>> >>> tree)
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> I’m afraid that we can’t simply leave the OLD 8407 as it is.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> That’s said, I’m only the pen holder and will implement
>>> whatever
>>> >> the
>>> >>> WG decides here.
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Cheers,
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Med
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> *De :* Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net<mailto:lberger@labn.net>> *Envoyé :* mardi 1
>>> octobre 2024
>>> >>> 13:37 *À :* BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
>>> >> <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>>;
>>> >>> netmod@ietf.org<mailto:netmod@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis@ietf.org>; Jan
>>> >> Lindblad
>>> >>> (jlindbla) <jlindbla@cisco.com<mailto:jlindbla@cisco.com>>
>>> >>> *Cc :* Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net<mailto:kent+ietf@watsen.net>> *Objet :* Re:
>>> [netmod]
>>> >> Re:
>>> >>> WGLC on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Med, Jan, WG,
>>> >>>
>>> >>> I have to say that I read the discussion concluding with to
>>> NOT
>>> >> change
>>> >>> the current recommendation, see
>>> >>>
>>> >>
>>> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
>>> >> mail
>>> >>> archive.ietf.org<http://archive.ietf.org><http://archive.ietf.org/>%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Fnetmod%2F0Q0YiyNi15V-
>>> Szzf5awLVh-
>>> >> 15_c%2
>>> >>
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>>> >> 51bc
>>> >>
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>>> >> 1fn3
>>> >>> YScP4MBfkRWYvYXz90NyNI%3D&reserved=0
>>> >>>
>>> >>> I personally use an ereader (or computer) more than paper and
>>> >> having
>>> >>> to go to a static URL -- probably when I'm off line -- does
>>> NOT
>>> >> seem
>>> >>> like something we should be recommending.  Furthermore, I'm
>>> not
>>> >> sure
>>> >>> what our process has to say about having the HTML include
>>> *text
>>> >>> content* that is not in the text version.
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Again just my perspective.
>>> >>>
>>> >>> What do others think? do they feel strongly that this change
>>> >> from the
>>> >>> current recommendation (in RFC8340) of having long trees in
>>> >> appendixes
>>> >>> is a good or bad idea? (Yes, I'm in the strongly against
>>> camp.)
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Thanks,
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Lou
>>> >>>
>>> >>> On 10/1/2024 4:24 AM, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:
>>> >>>
>>> >>> Hi Lou,
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>>     1. The comment that triggered the change and companion
>>> thread
>>> >> where
>>> >>>     this was discussed and changes proposed can be seen at:
>>> >>>
>>> >>>
>>> >>
>>> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
>>> >> mail
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