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Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7312)

Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> Wed, 18 January 2023 15:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8519 (7312)
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This erratum looks correct to me and (IMHO) should be verified.

Eliot

On 18.01.23 15:29, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8519,
> "YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7312
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
>
> Section: A.1
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>     The "example-newco-acl" module is an example of a company's
>     proprietary model that augments the "ietf-acl" module.  It shows how
>     to use 'augment' with an XML Path Language (XPath) expression to add
>     additional match criteria, actions, and default actions for when no
>     ACE matches are found.  All these are company proprietary extensions
>     or system feature extensions.  "example-newco-acl" is just an
>     example, and it is expected that vendors will create their own
>     proprietary models.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>     The "example-newco-acl" module is an example of a company's
>     proprietary model that augments the "ietf-access-control-list" module.  It shows how
>     to use 'augment' with an XML Path Language (XPath) expression to add
>     additional match criteria, actions, and default actions for when no
>     ACE matches are found.  All these are company proprietary extensions
>     or system feature extensions.  "example-newco-acl" is just an
>     example, and it is expected that vendors will create their own
>     proprietary models.
>
> Notes
> -----
> There is no "ietf-acl" module in the document.
>
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC8519 (draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-21)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)
> Publication Date    : March 2019
> Author(s)           : M. Jethanandani, S. Agarwal, L. Huang, D. Blair
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Modeling
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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