Re: [netmod] Updated version of NMDA Datastores draft with WG LC comments addressed.
Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Thu, 30 November 2017 08:10 UTC
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Updated version of NMDA Datastores draft with WG LC comments addressed.
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Hi, I have posted a new version of the NMDA draft, draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-07. With this version, we believe that all WGLC and post-WGLC comments have been addressed. See below for the first set of changes between 04 and 05. The changes from 05 to 07 are: o added a definition of "datastore schema" to the terminology section, and use that term in the document. o clarified that the datastore schema for <operational> MUST be a superset of the config datastores (except node omission). o specified that actions and rpc are invoked in the context of operational /martin Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com> wrote: > Hi, > > I've just posted an updated version of the NMDA datastores draft > (draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-05.txt). The authors believe > that this should address all of the issues raised during the WG LC. > The issues themselves have been tracked at > https://github.com/netmod-wg/datastore-dt/issues > > Note, there has been a recent (post WG LC) issue raised by Andy > concerning the handling of Action statements. A further update to the > draft may be required depending on the conclusion of that discussion. > > Please may I thank you for reviewing the draft and providing > comments. Please may I also ask that if you raised an issue that you > check the latest draft/diff to ensure that all of your comments have > been addressed satisfactorily. > > In addition, I would like to summarize what I perceive are the main > changes made to the draft since WG LC version (-04) so that those > particular areas can be reviewed as appropriate: > > 1. There is a new "objectives" section added after the short > introduction to address Tom's request of a better overview. > > 2. We have introduced the notion of a "configuration transformation" > to describe the possible changes between running and intended, hence > allowing inactive config and templating to be used only as examples > and not in any normative text. > > 3. The conventional datastores sections have been moved to a more > intuitive order, which is a minor change, but causes a slightly larger > diff when diffing the -04 and -05 versions. > > 4. The description of <running> and <intended> datastores have both > been updated, hopefully better explaining the relationship between > these datastores and <operational>. > > Finally, I'll leave it to the WG Chairs to specify what the > appropriate next steps are in the WG LC process. > > Many thanks, > Rob > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
- [netmod] Updated version of NMDA Datastores draft… Robert Wilton
- Re: [netmod] Updated version of NMDA Datastores d… Lou Berger
- Re: [netmod] Updated version of NMDA Datastores d… Martin Bjorklund