[netmod] Re: Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-06

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To: Michal Vaško <mvasko@cesnet.cz>, "yang-doctors@ietf.org" <yang-doctors@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [netmod] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-06
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Hi all,

On this one: 

> - all 'local-as' and 'peer-as' nodes are uint32, so in JSON encoding numbers should be
> used instead of strings 

Even if this an example, the authors may consider using "inet:as-number" rather than uint32.

As I'm there,

(1)

 the name of this leaf is weird:

       leaf name {
         type inet:ip-address;
       }

I would change the name. 

(2) I would delete from the description of the ietf-system-datastore module:

        The key words 'MUST', 'MUST NOT', 'REQUIRED', 'SHALL',
        'SHALL NOT', 'SHOULD', 'SHOULD NOT', 'RECOMMENDED',
        'NOT RECOMMENDED', 'MAY', and 'OPTIONAL' in this document
        are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 (RFC 2119)
        (RFC 8174) when, and only when, they appear in all
        capitals, as shown here.";

(3) Please fix this part in the IANA cons:

OLD: 
      name: ietf-system-datastore
      prefix: sys

NEW:
      name: ietf-system-datastore
      prefix: sysds

(4) Security cons: Please use the sec template in both subsections

For example, 

CURRENT:
   The Network Configuration Access Control Model (NACM) [RFC8341]
   provides the means to restrict access for particular NETCONF users to
   a preconfigured subset of all available NETCONF protocol operations
   and content.

Does not mention RESTCONF.

I think other para of the template should make it to these sections.

Also, you may start each subsection by indicating the name of the module instead of "The YANG module defined in this document" because two modules are defined in the doc.

Hope this helps.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Michal Vaško via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : jeudi 13 juin 2024 12:25
> À : yang-doctors@ietf.org
> Cc : draft-ietf-netmod-system-config.all@ietf.org; last-
> call@ietf.org; netmod@ietf.org
> Objet : [netmod] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-
> netmod-system-config-06
> 
> 
> Reviewer: Michal Vaško
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> This is my yang-doctor review of draft-ietf-netmod-system-config,
> which includes 2 small YANG modules, in addition to a few example
> modules.
> 
> ietf-system-datastore:
> - small module with a single identity, no issues
> 
> ietf-netconf-resolve-system:
> - module with similar simple augments to standard ietf-netconf
> and ietf-netconf-nmda modules, no issues
> 
> As for the example YANG modules and data, there are a few nits:
> 
> example-acl:
> - leaf-list application - path is not indented
> 
> Section 8.2 BGP examples:
> - 'inet:port' type does not exist in the latest ietf-inet-types
> (2013) YANG module, only 'port-number' - all 'local-as' and
> 'peer-as' nodes are uint32, so in JSON encoding numbers should be
> used instead of strings - 'local-port' is using uint16 type so in
> JSON encoding numbers should be used instead of strings
> 
> Finally, the examples and their data are using YANG snippets and
> data without namespaces or module names, which may be fine for
> illustration purposes but possibly confusing.
> 
> 
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