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tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Mon, 23 September 2024 10:12 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>, NETMOD Group <netmod@ietf.org>
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From: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
Sent: 17 September 2024 23:01

All,

This starts working group last call on

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang/

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model/

<tp>
A bit outside my comfort zone but...

I get stuck on the first sentence of the Abstract
'This document defines YANG modules to add support for classifying
   traffic received on interfaces as Ethernet/VLAN framed packets to
   sub-interfaces based on the fields available in the Ethernet/VLAN
   frame headers.  '

'Add support for classifying ... as ... to .. '
Whoops - I classify  'as' so do not expect another 'to' which implies assignment to me.

Perhaps
'This document defines YANG modules to allocate(?assign)
   traffic received as Ethernet/VLAN framed packets to
   sub-interfaces using fields available in the Ethernet/VLAN
  headers.  '

 Tom Petch

Note: the IPR call is running in parallel with this LC as no IPR was
previously disclosed.

The working group last call ends on October 1st.

Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

Thank you,
Lou (Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)


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