Re: [netmod] [core] πŸ”” WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12, -sid-11, -comi-09, -yang-library-01 / -sid-11 review

Ivaylo Petrov <ivaylo@ackl.io> Wed, 15 April 2020 13:27 UTC

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From: Ivaylo Petrov <ivaylo@ackl.io>
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2020 15:26:52 +0200
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Subject: Re: [netmod] [core] πŸ”” WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12, -sid-11, -comi-09, -yang-library-01 / -sid-11 review
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Hello Esko,

Thank you for your review and your comments! They do help us improve this
document. Please find my answers below (prefixed with [IP]). Note that the
diff after handing your comments and those of Juergen Schoenwaelder can be
found at [1].

Best regards,
Ivaylo

[1]:
https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-core-sid&url2=http://core-wg.github.io/yang-cbor/draft-ietf-core-sid-latest.txt


On Mon, Mar 30, 2020 at 1:17 PM Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl>
wrote:

> Hello CoRE,
>
> I did a quick review of the -sid-11 draft; it looks ready for publication.
> Some minor issues found :
>
> Reference to RFC 7120 early allocation procedure: the allocation policies
> for the registries are all "Expert review". And the RFC 7120 early
> allocation procedure is defined, to do early allocations. However RFC 7120
> mentions that this procedure only applies in case :
>    (Section 2)
>    a. The code points must be from a space designated as "RFC
>        Required", "IETF Review", or "Standards Action".  Additionally,
>        requests for early assignment of code points from a
>        "Specification Required" registry are allowed if the
>        specification will be published as an RFC.
> So at first sight it looks like the procedure is not applicable, taken
> strictly. However IANA indicates (
> https://www.iana.org/help/protocol-registration) that "Expert review" is
> part of "Specification Required" so it would apply still. But in RFC 8126
> this is not mentioned in the same manner - so it could confuse some readers
> about whether it applies or not. Maybe some text could be added to state
> why RFC 7120 process does apply to the "Expert review" policy, even though
> "Expert review" is not listed under Section 2 point a. of RFC 7120.  (Note
> that early allocation by RFC 7120 only applies to "Expert review"
> allocations for draft documents that aim to become RFC.)
>

[IP]: We are in the process of reformulating this.

Section 6.3.3: table column 1 is very narrow and it breaks the entry point
> integer number, which is confusing. Why not make this column wider by one
> character? One of the last 2 columns can be made more narrow if needed.
>

[IP]: Fixed.

Section 3: "RESCONF" -> RESTCONF
>

[IP]: Fixed.


> Section 3: CoRECONF -> CORECONF
>

[IP]: Fixed.

Section 3: "For example how this could be achieved, please refer to"
> -> For examples on how this could be achieved, please refer to
>

[IP]: Fixed.

Section 3: "For diagram of one"
> -> For a diagram of one ...
>

[IP]: Fixed.

Best regards
>
> Esko
>
> IoTconsultancy.nl  |  Email/Skype: esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: core <core-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Carsten Bormann
> Sent: Monday, March 9, 2020 14:05
> To: core <core@ietf.org>
> Cc: netmod@ietf.org
> Subject: [core] πŸ”” WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts:
> draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12, -sid-11, -comi-09, -yang-library-01
>
> It took us a long time to get the four CORECONF drafts in sync,
> but now we are ready for WGLC.
>
> This starts a working group last call for
> β€” draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12
> β€” draft-ietf-core-sid-11
> β€” draft-ietf-core-comi-09
> β€” draft-ietf-core-yang-library-01
>
> ending on
>
>         24:00 UTC on Tuesday, March 31, 2020.
>
> (This includes some extra time for the IETF week and for cross-WG
> coordination.)
>
> This WGLC is copied to the netmod WG mailing list; please do have a look
> at these drafts as they are slated to become a part of the greater
> YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF family.  We intend the discussion to be on the
> CoRE mailing list, but if you find a fundamental issue with YANG or
> RESTCONF, feel free to discuss that on netmod instead.
>
> Please start a new email thread for each major issue that will need
> discussion and make sure the subject line includes the draft name and
> some sort of name for the issue.  (Minor issues such as typos can also
> be sent to the authors.)
>
> If you read the draft and think it looks fine, please send a one line
> email to the list or to the chairs letting us know that so we can get
> a feel of how broad the review has been.
>
> (To reviewers and authors:)  If you are aware of any patent claims that
> might apply to systems that implement these drafts, please review BCP 78
> and BCP 79 and make any appropriate IPR declaration before the last-call
> ends. If you are not sure whether you need to make a declaration or not,
> please talk to the chairs and we will help.
>
> Grüße, Carsten
>
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