Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-00.txt

[Juergen Schoenwaelder <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

I have posted a new I-D that addresses your comments (I hope).

I also fixed the quoting bug reported by Jernej Tuljak
<[e-mail]> on the mailing list on 2013-02-24.

The diff is already available here:

http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-01.txt

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On Fri, Mar 22, 2013 at 06:24:57PM +0100, Benoit Claise wrote:
> Juergen, NETMOD participants,
> 
> Two comments
> 
> 1.
> For the ip-address-no-zone, ipv4-address-no-zone, and
> ipv6-address-no-zone, don't you need a reference to the zone
> information in the description?
> 
>      description
>         "The ip-address-no-zone type represents an IP address without
>          zone information in an IP version neutral way.  The format
>          of the textual representations implies the IP version.";
> 
> Doesn't give me a pointer to what a zone information is. So I don't
> know what ip-address-no-zone is.
> Note: I faced the zone issue only a year ago. Before that, I had no
> clue what it was.
> 
> 
> 2.
> The section "Appendix A. Changes from RFC 6021" is pretty light:
> 
>      This version adds new type definitions to the YANG modules. For
>    the further details, see the revision statement of the YANG modules.
> 
> Take it or leave it. However, I can tell that its resolution will
> please some IESG members, specifically because the rfcdiff tool
> doesn't do a good job of comparing RFC6021 with
> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6021-bis-00.txt
> 
> Proposal
> 
>      This version adds new type definitions to the YANG modules. The
>    first YANG module, ietf-yang-types adds the following new data
>    types: yang-identifier, hex-string, uuid, and dotted-quad. The
>    second YANG module, ietf-inet-types, adds the following new data
>    types: ip-address-no-zone, ipv4-address-no-zone, and
>    ipv6-address-no-zone.
> 
> Regards, Benoit (OPS AD)

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