[netmod] comments needed!
tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Wed, 18 May 2022 09:33 UTC
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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
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Subject: [netmod] comments needed!
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I was looking at
draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-15
where
s.7.5.2 has
+--rw (signaling-option)? choice
| +--:(bgp) case
| | ... choice bgp-type
| +--:(ldp-or-l2tp) case
so I expect to see
choice signaling-option which I do on page 87
case bgp also on page 87
....
case ldp-or-l2tp nowhere to be seen.
Some of you will guess what has happened, others of you with a few minutes to spare may want to take a look and work it out. It took me quite a while and it would have been much easier if I could link the tree diagram (snippets) to the YANG module. (It could have been worse, there could have been nested single-use groupings imported from another I-D but even so it took long enough:-(
The answer for me is more comment lines, in the module and in the tree diagram so that the two can be linked together.
Tom Petch
p.s. it is a container, which is valid YANG.
- [netmod] comments needed! tom petch