Re: [netmod] draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-16

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Subject: Re: [netmod] draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-16
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Andy Bierman" <andy@yumaworks.com>
Sent: Wednesday, February 07, 2018 5:48 PM

> On Wed, Feb 7, 2018 at 4:58 AM, t.petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:
>
> > Andy
> >
> > If an RFC is mentioned in a Description clause, should it also
appear in
> > the related Reference clause?
>
> yes -- there are many places in 6087bis that mention the
reference-stmt
>
> e.g.:
>
>    If the notification semantics are defined in an external document
>    (other than another YANG module indicated by an import statement),
>    then a reference statement MUST be present.
>
> I cannot find any text that says it is OK or not OK to also put
> the reference in the description-stmt.

Andy

Just to be clear, what I am seeing is RFCxxxx in a Description clause in
a YANG module but not appearing anywhere else in the I-D, not in a
Reference clause or in the I-D Reference sections or anywhere.

e.g. in draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang
 leaf uuid {
            type yang:uuid;
            description "A Universally Unique IDentifier in the string
representation
                defined in RFC 4122.

4122 appears in three such Description clauses but nowhere else; I am
thinking that it should also be in a Reference clause as well

Tom Petch

> > draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-05 has examples of this not being the
case,
> > as I mention in a recent post.  I assumed that they should be but
cannot
> > see any discussion of this in RFC6087bis
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> >
> Andy
>