[netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8407 (5693)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8407,
"Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5693

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Mobashshera Rasool <mobashshera.rasool@huawei.com>;

Section: 4.17

Original Text
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Note that the set of features within a module
   is easily discovered by the reader, but the set of related modules
   within the entire YANG library is not as easy to identity.  Module
   names with a common prefix can help readers identity the set of
   related modules, but this assumes the reader will have discovered and
   installed all the relevant modules.

Corrected Text
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Note that the set of features within a module
   is easily discovered by the reader, but the set of related modules
   within the entire YANG library is not as easy to identify.  Module
   names with a common prefix can help readers identify the set of
   related modules, but this assumes the reader will have discovered and
   installed all the relevant modules.

Notes
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The word identity is not correct here. It should be identify to give the sentence correct meaning.

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RFC8407 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-20)
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Title               : Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models
Publication Date    : October 2018
Author(s)           : A. Bierman
Category            : BEST CURRENT PRACTICE
Source              : Network Modeling
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG