Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-07 (part 2)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Mon, 02 November 2020 19:54 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: "draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff.all@ietf.org>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-07 (part 2)
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Third attempt, this time only attached as a plain text file.

Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>
> Sent: 02 November 2020 19:42
> To: draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff.all@ietf.org; netmod@ietf.org
> Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-07 (part 2)
> 
> Part 2, unfortunately my original email (attached) was truncated somewhere
> along the way ...
> 
> The remainder of my comments are:
> 
> 
> Suggest adding an example ", e.g., <operational>."
> 
>        o  filter-spec: This is a choice between different filter
> constructs
>           to identify the portions of the datastore to be retrieved.  It
>           acts as a node selector that specifies which data nodes are
> within
>           the scope of the comparison and which nodes are outside the
> scope