Re: [netmod] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09: (with COMMENT)

Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com> Wed, 10 January 2018 15:01 UTC

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From: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Jan 2018 07:00:18 -0800
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 5:15 AM, Juergen Schoenwaelder <
j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> wrote:

> On Mon, Jan 08, 2018 at 05:05:09AM -0800, Eric Rescorla wrote:
> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> >
> >       protocol interactions with other systems and that is neither
> >       conventional nor dynamic configuration.
> > Could you provide an example of this?
>
> Many DHCP implementations do not go through a dynamic datastore and
> deliver configuration state straight into the operational state. An IP
> address learned via DHCP on such a system will be tagged with
> or:learned.
>

I don't think it's imperative, but it would be nice to have this example in
the
text.


>    datastore that holds the complete current configuration on the
> >    device.  It MAY include configuration that requires further
> >    transformation before it can be applied, e.g., inactive
> >
> > If I am reading the text, this doesn't seem to be true because "system
> > configuration" is not included.
>
> Yes, it might make sense to remove 'complete' here to align the
> sentence in 5.1.3 with the definition of 'running configuration
> datastore'.
>

Thanks,

-Ekr


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