Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Thu, 26 October 2017 01:22 UTC

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From: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Date: Wed, 25 Oct 2017 18:22:56 -0700
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Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14
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Acee,

Thanks for reviewing the draft.

> On Oct 25, 2017, at 6:21 AM, Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Kent, Mahesh, et al,
> 
> I have read the draft and support publication. I have two comments on the
> -14 version. 
> 
>  1. The tree diagrams do not fit within the draft pages. Note that recent
> versions of pyang support the —tree-line-length parameter and this may
> help. 

I used the —tree-line-length=72 as the parameter to generate the tree, and that is why you see the line wrap around.

>  2. While it is non-normative, I’d prefer to have appendix A.1 removed.
> It was a mistake for vendors to mix packet filtering and route filtering
> in the first place and the draft should not insinuate that the model will
> be augmented to do this.

The example is just an example of how the model can be extended. There is no implication that the model will be augmented to support mixing of packet filtering with route filtering.

> 
> Thanks,
> Acee 
> 
> On 10/20/17, 5:37 PM, "netmod on behalf of Kent Watsen"
> <netmod-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of kwatsen@juniper.net> wrote:
> 
>> 
>> All,
>> 
>> This starts a two-week working group last call on
>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14.
>> 
>> The working group last call ends on November 3.
>> Please send your comments to the netmod mailing list.
>> 
>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
>> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
>> This is useful and important, even from authors.
>> 
>> Could the authors, explicitly CC-ed on this email, please
>> also confirm at this time that they are unaware of any
>> IPR related to this draft.
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> Netmod Chairs
>> 
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