Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Wed, 25 October 2017 13:21 UTC

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>
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Hi Kent, Mahesh, et al,

I have read the draft and support publication. I have two comments on the
-14 version. 

  1. The tree diagrams do not fit within the draft pages. Note that recent
versions of pyang support the —tree-line-length parameter and this may
help. 
  2. While it is non-normative, I’d prefer to have appendix A.1 removed.
It was a mistake for vendors to mix packet filtering and route filtering
in the first place and the draft should not insinuate that the model will
be augmented to do this.

Thanks,
Acee 

On 10/20/17, 5:37 PM, "netmod on behalf of Kent Watsen"
<netmod-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of kwatsen@juniper.net> wrote:

>
>All,
>
>This starts a two-week working group last call on
>draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14.
>
>The working group last call ends on November 3.
>Please send your comments to the netmod mailing list.
>
>Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
>and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
>This is useful and important, even from authors.
>
>Could the authors, explicitly CC-ed on this email, please
>also confirm at this time that they are unaware of any
>IPR related to this draft.
>
>Thank you,
>Netmod Chairs
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